Reviews for A second chance |
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mkkw124 chapter 35 . 9/8 this is a great story. Well done. I love everything about it. Coming from someone who don't usually finish stories with my attention span lmao. i love it! |
mkkw124 chapter 24 . 9/8 this is my favorite chapter |
mkkw124 chapter 10 . 9/8 we were on a break! this has to be a friends reference! Great story by the way |
Ohma chapter 13 . 8/16 meh...westerners really are a bunch of cucks dropped |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10 Bulma wasn't in her 30 when she met vegeta because in beerus she was celebrating her 34 |
Efri14 chapter 35 . 5/19 Great! Make a sequel please... |
Guest chapter 35 . 10/3/2019 Loved very original |
Guest chapter 24 . 8/8/2019 Do you ever think about how goku had to have had sex to get kids? |
intata chapter 15 . 8/6/2019 Love the plot. Love the story. Basically, I love everything about what you've written. Don't like HOW you've written it, though. It's like a 30 y/o put the story together, then a 12 y/o wrote it. |
Princess Narin chapter 35 . 7/18/2019 Excellent story, I entertained a lot reading it. I am not English speaking but the translator helped me explore this horizon. I always love alternative stories to the real time line of Db. I think you handled situations very well and you provoked a lot of pain in my heart regarding Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. But it ended with a happy ending that filled me with true peace. Thank you. |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/13/2019 Thanks, I hate it. Yamcha would never act like that. |
Queen Hady chapter 4 . 6/3/2019 Someone is so jealous |
Queen Hady chapter 3 . 6/3/2019 Wow! amazing |
Queen Hady chapter 2 . 6/3/2019 He was smart |
Queen Hady chapter 1 . 6/3/2019 Nice first chapter |