Spookier by the minute. This is one time the guys really Inspector Harry C. of the S.F.P.D. aka Dirty Harry to help them maybe?

So far so good. Murray's about to leave the hospital. Now, all we need is for a viewing of the paramedic report handed in by Gage and Desoto?

Lt. Quinlan is not the type to worry about any of these guys getting blasted away. Maybe Nick and Cody should at least recruit their old pals Hannibal Smith, H.M. Murdock, Templeton Peck, and B.A. Baracus to help solve the case?

Sounding fishier. Guys that the guys need Matt Houston of "MATT HOUSTON" to help them, huh?

Murray getting shot? Oh, dear. Well, the most helpful of options are as follows:
Send him to Rampart General for Doctors Brackett and Early from "EMERGENCY!" to operate on?
Send him to U.C.L.A. Medical Center, and Dr. Joe Gannon of "MEDICAL CENTER"?
Send him to Blair General to become a patient of Dr. Jim Kildare of "DR. KILDARE"?
Send him to Dr. Ben Casey of "BEN CASEY, M.D."?
Send him to Dr. Marcus Welby of "MARCUS WELBY, M.D."?
Or, any of the Port Charles doctors featured on "GENERAL HOSPITAL"?
Fellow fans,
You decide.

I liked your story idea, but the writing was very poor and hard to follow. I had to translate what you wrote mentally and got a head ache. Please buy a thesaurus and a dictionary and take a writing class.

Yay it's done! Thank you for sharing the story :D

Wow... it gets more exciting! Please write more!

Wow, what a cliffhanger! Please go on! I'm so glad you're writing Riptide