A pastime where one stands on a platform riding waves- SURFING!

Why neoptolemus you asshole?! i understand that he was just running berserk becauce he found out his father is dead. you destroyed Achilles’s bloodline meaning his descendants neoptolemus l of epirus, alexander l of epirus, olympias of epirus, aeacides, pyrrhus l and his sister deidamia l of epirus, neoptolemus ll of epirus, alexander ll of epirus, pyrrhus ll of epirus, pyrrhus lll and his cousin deidamia ll of epirus. you are an asshole. creating incorrect history. you could have made the mythic neoptolemus/pyrrhus a good guy, being raised right by his mother, making him call percy uncle believing that he and his father are like brothers, percy will promise neoptolemus revenge on Paris and paris only exept priam, polyxena (who, thanks to percy’s Words of reasoning, is guilty for faking her love for Achilles and led him to his death.) and astyanax (according to other legends neoptolemus brought him to greece, sparing the infant son of Hector. (he also had a son polydorus and became the ancestor of the kings of the franks and ruggiero son of ruggiero ll.) make him a good husband, father and step-father of andromache, astyanax, molossus and pergamus. he was killed by orestes (guided by apollo by stunning him.) make percy have enouth and challenge Apollo in a dual for the fate of the aeacid dynasty, have percy victorious and give the full grown molossus anaklusmos and finish Apollo off by cutting him in half, avenging his father and grandfather.

YOU FUCKING SON OF A BITCH HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE NEOPTOLEMUS AS AN ASSHOLE WHO IS NOTHING LIKE ACHILLES IN EPIRUS HE RESPECTED AND HONORED ANDROMACHE HE IS A GOOD HUSBAND OF ANDROMACHE AND A GOOD OF MOLOSSUS YOU DESTROYED ACHILLES’S BLOODLINE. NO NEOPTOLEMUS NO MOLOSSUS NO MOLOSSUS NO OLYMPIAS NO OLYMPIAS NO ALEXANDER THE GREAT HOW DARE YOU BETRAY ALL OF GREECE AND MACEDONIA I LOVE MACEDONIA. MACEDONIA IS GREEK YOU FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT. I WILL FIND YOU AND BREAK BOFH YOUR ARMS AND BREAK BOTH OF YOUR LEGS AND I WILL BREAK YOUR BACK AND SPINE YOU HEAR ME YOU FUCKING TRAITOR I WILL BEAT YOU INTO A BOODY PULP AND DESTROY YOUR COMPUTER I WILL MAKE REGRET FOR DESTROYING ACHILLES’S BLOODLINE THE NON-EXISTENTS OF ALEXANDER THE GREATEST GREEK OF ALL GREEK YOU WILL BE NOTHING BUT A BLOODIED TURD IN THE WIND!

Dear Sharkattack719,
I truly enjoy your stories. Their quite remarkable. You’ve done really well in creating them. While you are right in saying they aren’t 100% accurate, they still have incredible detail. From someone who has studied Greek and Roman mythology since second grade, read Rick Riordan’s books, and read both the Iliad and Odyssey (they’re pretty good even if they’re old) I tell you that you’ve done an excellent job of including even the smallest parts of the great epics of Greek heroes. The depth of personality in your characters is incredible. You even wrote about parts of these myths I didn’t know. Sometimes I feel as if I’ve read every myth and there is nothing left to learn, but you proved me wrong and I’m thankful for it. Keep writing. Whatever you do don’t give it up. You’ve got skill and if you keep working at it, it’ll pay off. Someday I hope to see a published book of yours on the shelf of a Barnes and Noble.
Yours truly,
Ariel Minerva

Why Ajax?! He is much better than Odysseus and I honest ad not deceitful why did you kill him ... (Still obviously love the story)

Oh, and if that's not the reason why you deleted it, then I'd love to know why. (Cont. of chapter 23 Review)

I could have sworn that I had written reviews for this story... Maybe I didn't, or maybe they were taken down for some reason... Well anyways, even if it's been a while and I don't remember every little detail of the story, I do remember that I absolutely love this story. I'm mainly writing this review, however, because I just recently noticed that the 3rd installment in the series is no longer up. I know that it was discontinued, something that I wish didn't happen, but I still think that you should have kept it up.

Wait... What?! The story ends here and picks up in the American Revolution? Seems to me allt of wasted story potential being lost.

so I think Zoe smiles at Percy because he will never really break the oath. I think the Percy's oath is taken as that he will never maliciously attack women or take advantage of them for his own personal gain. That when he made the oath he was think of Jason and Heracles, who took mistreated women for their own selfish reasons. Percy attacked the hunters not because he wanted to hurt them, but because he thought he had to for Greece.

Also I have read a few of your notes about being a little disappointed by number of follows/reviews. For me your story is difficult to read because of your sentence structure, and lack of clarity of what your trying to say in that sentence. If ff allowed me to copy and paste Iwould offer you examples. This critique also goes for the Argonauts story.

Your ideas are good, but there are sometimes a little hard to decipher from your sentences.

Thanks for writing.

Well your writting is getting better and better... keep up the good work... wish there are more fav it currently has... a worthy piece of writthing this is... keep it up

I cant find the sequel for this book

Wait what happened to Apollo?!

Can you make another story please from the evaluation hero but one about Rome or the war of jurlesum please because the gods were with the Britains thought that please. And could you make that Percy finds the Ark and talks to go because, if you add that image what stories you could make. Here are some ideas for title:everlasting hero: the Ark or everlasting hero: the fall of the empire. Anyway these are some ideas, good luck and can you contuie everlasting hero please.

Ouch

One of the most well-written fanfic series' I have ever read. However, I'm wondering what happened to the next one. Keep up the good work. As someone who enjoys reading stories of Ancient Greece, this story is probably my favorite yet.

Keep up the good work.