Nice job. Defientely know how to keep the suspense. can't wait to read more.

Is Queen Clarion one of the sisters? Why does she has the necklace that she gave to David? Hmmm...or is she the one who has the Magic-talents?
Nice story. :)

I'm guess Queen Clarion is to stand in as the celestial talent, being of the magic talent. Just a guess. :)

I'd say that Queen Clarion's one of the three sisters, but that'd be too obvious. Could she maybe be the daughter of one?
On another note, excellent update! The wait was well worth it. I especially loved the twist you threw in there. I need to get back to my story soon :P Also, that creature that you described sounds an awful lot like the Nevermore from RWBY.
Btw, what in Neverland has Tinkerbell been eating? ;)

well, i'm having a wee guess, is it Queen Clarion? Btw, great chapter, as always!

He sees David's necklace [the pendant] around his neck.
Maybe that's the key where David finds the elements he needs, and the other David knows it.

I am so glad you decided to update this! It's really getting interesting. David seems different though. It's like his personality completely changed.

you need to update soon I am hooked on this story!

This is just amazing. It IS a little dark for a Tinkerbell story, but it is still great.
Btw, since David is a fairy who has the powers of every talent, and seemingly beyond, is he able to go into the winter woods? Or is he still unable due to him being born on the warm fairy side?

I really adored your first story prior to this, it's obvious that Tink really likes David while at the same time Terence likes Tink. Based on your description of David's worries, it almost sounds like he knows he may not return to PH after this all over, or something like that.

I just found this series yesterday. It is absolutely phenomenal! I can't wait to figure out what happens next. I wonder what it is that David (the good one) heard.

oh boy! Both hv returned! Yeah, i'm freaked out but i love this story! Great!

To add to my post from yesterday, why not use the glass butterfly to reveal the true David?
For example, you know how Cinderella's slipper was broken and put back together in the third movie? Something like that, because wouldn't the glass butterfly be meant for the "good" David and not the other way around?

If it's the bad David, please somehow bring back the good David.
Based on your first story, I don't think David, if he did truly recognize Tink, he wouldn't just break the glass butterfly in front of her and smirk in front of them all. Tink probably knows he's not the real David, so maybe she devises a way to get the crushed butterfly pieces back and away from "this David" and consult the Voices of the Tree about what's happened. What truly happened to the "true" David? Please bring him back.

eh i hope it's good one! If it is that shadow magic guy , how clarion will fight against him, if he is more powerful? So i think it is the david we all know! Btw, thanx for the sequel! I love it!