this is so incredible. genuinely, your writing is amazing. this is art.

Heartbreaking. Just heartbreaking, so well done.

pls write moooore

The way you wrote was so amazing and fluid. And of course Gwaine would be persistent and react just how he did.

So I was really curious when I saw the annotation 'rather unsatisfying ending' so I delved into the story to find myself abruptly thrown out of it suddenly. And I startled a bit, a bemused smile on my face. I like *that*! That was wonderful and the story is so brilliant in its simplicity. I really like your writing style! :)

*cries* Sometimes it's the short one that make me cry the hardest.

This is absolutely perfect thank way it is. Thanks for writing and posting, it's appreciated.

Please write sequel

Ooh! I loved this it was different!

Oh dear...guilt angst and a plethory of other sad things...yay! I am an Addams family girl so don't judge.

It was nice, but I don't think it needs a sequel. That would just ruin things, IMO. Well done!

I thought this was well written, and the intervention of Gwaine very in character. Though you are looking for a sequel, this fic as a stand alone feels alright. It leaves everything to the reader, but it's stopped at a point that is satisfying enough. Merlin's slow burn is believable.

Poor Merlin :(

Amazing! :D3

GOOD GRIEF JUST TEAR OUR HEARTS OUT WHY DON'T YOU

urgh as sad as that was I really enjoyed it. *grabs tissue* come on Lexi you can read the sequel without sobbing you can do it

This doesn't need a sequel, it needs to be continued! It has so much potential as a first chapter of some thing more.