This is an excellent story. I definitely approve of how you are handling the romance-it makes it more satisfying long term. I also am glad that you seem to be going the ménage a trois route with Lyn, Florina and Will. It’s not an uncommon route outside of full on harem stories and I appreciate it particularly with the characters in question.

I had my doubts about Will as a protagonist at first-I tend to be doubtful of most Oc fanfics at first- but you successfully wrote him as an interesting, relatable and flawed character while still showing clear competence. Making him weak in direct combat was an interesting choice that really paid off I feel.

All in all, I really enjoyed the story and hope you will one day finish it. I see that it has been three years or so since it was last updated so I realize it isn’t terribly realistic but I can still hope.

A shame this story never got continued, but overall I really enjoyed reading this story and am glad that I took the time to read it.

Almost 3 years*

Dude. It’s been almost 2 years. Come back and write more pleaaaassseee

Just finished going through story for the first time, great story, would definitely recommend when completed.

Its been more than a year since last update.
What happened?
Did you lost interest in writing?
Did you hit a wall and don't know how to continue the story?
I pray that you haven't had an accident, if that was the case then I hope you're okay

So far, really interesting. Two things I like is that A: Mark isn't actually Lyn's tactician but still a character and a tactician, and B: You have two characters that have extremely similar names and I can't wait to see all the confusion that will cause.

Started reading this about 4 days ago, and now I'm already waiting for the next chapter, really like what you're doing here mate, good job all around, aside from some grammar errors but it happens,
Good luck with everything, until next chapter.

This is a great Story! I hope the next chapter comes out soon! And btw Lyn x will please!

Alright I gotta admit I never thought I'd feel bad for Mark, and I was wrong, I didn't think this chapter was going to give me another surprise, but then I read the ending and DAMM WAS I WRONG, that was actually amazing! Good job mate!

My only complaint is why would you name the tactician Will if there's already a Wil in the game? Doubtless, it's going to get a bit confusing.

man, that was a walk down the memory line for me, fire emblem was one of my favourite games when i was younger. time to take out my old gba and some serious strategies!

Tragic cliffhanger. Will doesn't remember... ah, but your dialogue is fantastic as always. Jaffar's opening letter, Hector's remarks before they headed in toward battle. Even Nino's perspective of everyone. Nicely worded. It's a unique and thrilling version of the FE7 story. I'll eagerly await a next installment, at your leisure.

Man, finally Battle Before Dawn. One of my favourite chapters from the game (except in Hector Hard Mode, where they kill Zephiel before you even reach him). I still remember the first time playing it, walking there like nothing was happening and suddenly I am attacked by Ursula, Softly with Grace plays and her battle quote shows up, and the she proceeds to blast my poor Raven. Good memories indeed. I also can't wait for Cog of Destiny.

I say that school and christmas kept you out of here.
A message to know if this story will be updated?