Reviews for Completely Unexpected
Doveflight chapter 45 . 9/21/2013
Wait what? It says its completed but that's an odd ending. And its right before a lemon! The torcher D:

Great story though.
CassiaLiv chapter 45 . 9/16/2013
is it over? please don't say it's over, i want to know if phil and ally get together?:)
missionlionheart chapter 44 . 9/15/2013
Awwwwww, ok literally perfect chapter, pairing, story, storyline, etc... When they kissed I actually clapped my hands, the fangirl scream came later :)
missionlionheart chapter 43 . 9/14/2013
So heartfelt, so moving, someone better get me a pillow because I can hear a fangirl scream coming on, this pairing kills me with happiness, honestly you created a masterpiece
CassiaLiv chapter 43 . 9/14/2013
please tell me there's more?!
missionlionheart chapter 42 . 9/13/2013
You told me to let it out so: asdfghklqbfjbsdkjfjkdhfkjdSHFJKDHFKJDHFKJSHFKJDHFK JSHFKJHDFJDKJFHK there are my feelings about that little rat, I feel so bad for Sarah but Dan will forgive her *i hope* I am going to miss this story a lot when it ends but then you'll hopefully start writing something new and it will be just as good :)
missionlionheart chapter 41 . 9/12/2013
THAT B*****D, OMFG I HATE HIM SO MUCH, SERIOUSLY BENJAMIN IS SUCH A ASDFGHJKL I CANT EVEN SHOW MY FEELINGS!
Spirited Mare chapter 40 . 9/11/2013
Oooooh, the tensions building. I'm looking forward to her talking to Benjamin. I seriously hope she shoots him down. I don't like that dude-_-
Spirited Mare chapter 39 . 9/10/2013
Anna, you wise thing you. At least someone's going to try and talk some sense into Sarah.. And someone else hates Benjamin, yay! I get that's he's there to provoke a reaction, and trust me you're writing it well because I'm very provoked! I'd say update soon, but I know you'll update it tomorrow anyway! Yay!
Spirited Mare chapter 38 . 9/9/2013
Noooooooooooooo! This sucks, she should just kick Benjamin, he's so annoying-_-
missionlionheart chapter 37 . 9/8/2013
YES LISTEN TO ALLY! I love the way this is still staying just as real as it was in the first few chapters. So realistic, I'm not quite sure how you've managed it but it works amazingly well :)
missionlionheart chapter 36 . 9/7/2013
Another great chapter! And I love Valery, could I have her as a sister or bestfriend?
Seriously how do you consistently write this so well. I am so in love with the story and asdfghjk the feels in these chapters are amazing. I can't wait to see her decision though I am hoping she chooses certain person :D
Spirited Mare chapter 35 . 9/6/2013
Yes, you have, silly! I was fan girdling so much, but now we've taken two steps backwards. Yes, we. I'm actually attached to your story now. Be afraid, be very afraid;)
missionlionheart chapter 35 . 9/6/2013
OMFGGGG AHHHHH SO GOOD, I AM SCCREAMING RIGHT NOW SO MANY EM0TIONS!
kklala1214 chapter 35 . 9/6/2013
Noooo! Noooo!
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