SO SO SO cute. Enjoyed it.

love it

That was freaking adorably funny! Great work!

awh that was too cute. from the stalking to talking to him burning the foodxD that was a good one;P

Okay seriously, that was adorable. I can totally see that happening. A relationship between the two could really bloom from this point.

So, I was told about this story and your great writing by Tori of Lorien, dashinginconverse. I am quite glad that she told me about your ability to write out The Shield as normal human beings, unlike so many other writers on this website. I am a fan of your writing style, especially because you're one of US - you know, those writers that don't say "I love you" right away in their stories. I saw on your profile that you're like us in believing that the slow-burn romance is the best.

Now, this story is quite amazing in making two people like Seth Rollins and Kaitlyn - a ship that I'm not the biggest fan of - believable. So, congratulations on that! I mean, you took something small (grocery shopping) and made it fun.

I can't wait to read more of your stories in the future, dashinginconverse. They're definitely better than 99.3% of the things on the Wrestling section. :) If you'd like to read some of my writing, head on over and check out my profile at Cinnamon Muffin Punk, though my stories are older, so they might not be as good. But don't worry, I am currently co-writing a few stories with Tori of Lorien, and they should be up in the near future!

Cheers,
Kyle

I have to admit, I really haven't been the biggest fan of this pairing, but this story made me love them more than I have before. It was absolutely adorable, and I love your writing style! It fit these two perfectly :) Both characters were written very well, and it's a little incident I could definitely see happening in a grocery store. And really, how can you not love Seth's face? ;)

Nicely done! I hope to see more of this pair from you!

Tori

The Shield has actually very recently began growing on me, so I'm just coming around to reading some of the pairings for this group. I've seen Kaitlyn paired with Dean, but I actually quite prefer her with Seth, and this story cemented that for me. I love that you took what could have been such a simple idea, but you make it into this cute thing that had me wondering what would happen next all the way through. I honestly thought Kaitlyn would follow Seth around the store until he made it to the checkout line. That was when I expected she would make her presence known and ask for a date or something, but I like the way you carried it out so much better. I definitely think they have mutual crushes, especially since Seth offered to make her dinner. He never would have done that for a girl he didn't like.

He's obviously into her, and it's so cute. When I got near the end, I actually said to myself that I wished there was a second part so we could find out how the dinner went, but you already had that covered and made a note of how it turned out. I love that Seth freaked out because of his mess-up, probably because he was trying so hard to impress Kaitlyn. He doesn't have much work to do in that department, because she already likes him, and I really hope they ended up getting together. They're such a cute couple, and their conversation was really easy and light, which I think is indicative of the fact that they would be really good for each other romantically. Great job on the story!

I'm also going to check out some of your other stories that include Shield members since I'm just sneaking in some reading time before Raw starts. I love what you did here so far. Wonderful work! I always enjoy your writing.

Surprisingly, I loved this. I'm usually not a fan of the pairing, but this was golden. I loved it. I was laughing the entire time. I imagine something like this happening exactly how you wrote it.

OMG. I've always kind of shunned this couple... probably because I haven't decided if I like Kaitlyn yet... but this summary was TOO good to pass up, and let me tell you, this oneshot didn't disappoint.
It was sooo funny...
and absolutely adorable.
I love it :)
-danie.

Lol! This oneshot was hilarious. I could actually picture Seth and Kaitlyn interacting this way. Everything was spot on. I loved it. You are improving so much(if that's even possible.) Haha! I hope you write this couple more in the future.

This must be the cutest thing ever! I loved it!

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Okay, first of all, thank you so, so much for writing this absolute diamond!

This was just flawless. I absolutely love how you took the humor approach to these two, it worked perfectly. The idea of The Shield grocery shopping is quite hilarious, and Kaitlyn almost mocking Seth with jokes was just hilarious and adorable. It's exactly how I'd expect her to act around anyone, even a member of The Shield; she just has that sense of humor, and you had it dead on!

I found myself smiling throughout all of this, especially getting to the part when Seth offers to cook for her. Ugh, how cute?! And I didn't even see it coming! Him burning the food and him & Kait laughing about it was even cuter.

Please, just go all out with this pairing, you write the two brilliantly. And I sure as hell wouldn't mind seeing more (you know this!)

Again, fabulous oneshot, and I better be seeing more! So much talent!

this cracked me the hell up i loved it!

This was funny! I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing :)

xxx