Loved it, but wish it was longer

WOW!

This is the most poorly written, insensitive non-cannonical piece of rubbish I have ever had the misfortune of finding. I hope your writing matures and you realise the comments of eating disorders and ridiculous fears from ungrounded theories with little to no context suit a write the age of ten. I couldn't read the whole thing, it was illogical and irritating.

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fuuuuuuck
i like this
a lot

lol XD Poor virginal Harry. *snort* lol

great idea XD
I liked it

Interesant! Saracul harry:))
Ai avea curajul sa scri un fanfic mpreg? Dar, Doamne fereste, sa nu fie tom...purtatorul? Ca m-as sinucide. Nu imi plac ficurile cand tom nu e dominant sau cand harry e femeie, sau, cand ficul nu are, pur si simplu sens. Ma bucur ca n-am dat de asa ceva si pe aici. Daca as da, n-as comenta. Ce tie nu-ti place, altuia nu-i face. Iti urez mult succes in continuare! A, daca te intereseaza...lucru de care nu sunt prea sigura, nu-mi plac nici triourile. Adica..."harry/tom/lucius/severus/draco..." Sunt...nu stiu.
Daca tie iti plac, sper ca nu te-am suparat cu acest comentariu.

This feels like it is unfinished. You really should have finished the lemon instead of ending it half way through. Other than that I really liked it.

AnimeAngel

Why did you end it there?! you should continue it :)

Son of a BITCH! Why Did You Stop There!? Eeh!? WICKEDNESS! EVILE!

What a lovely story! So hot and sweet! I loved it.