Awe~ this was so sweet~

Omigod so cute!

One wordbeautiful.

All those feels... great job!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwWWwwwwwwwwwWwwwwww so beautiful and I'm dying of feels

Eek feels with Shiro! I love it!

:D YES XD Amazing. Even if it isn't yaoi it's very cute. Even though Shiro is an ass I do think that he has a soft spot and this would be when it comes out. :) I really like it, it's really cute :)

KAWAII! This is the cutest thing! Its sad but still. XD

*Sniff, sniff* Th-That was so sweet, and sad, and I'm crying my eyes out right now. *Sniffs again and wipes eyes* Jeez, sometimes I hate how emotional I get when I'm reading. That was absolutely beautiful and you're an awesome writer, just in case you didn't know.

Aw, it's beautiful! Awesome job, it was so sweet, yet sad.

this almost made me cry, the characters stay in character even with emotions running high. You. Are. Awesome. btw soo cute!

Aww that was so cute!

That was just such a cute story! You did a very great job showing a different side of both Ichigo and his hollow while still staying in character for the mist part. I just want to give them both a hug now!

I always like short, fluffy stories like these. Great job u

I jus- I can't even... Wow... It's... This is beautiful. You actually almost made me cry.
And also made me want to punch Isshin and the SS in the face. With Thor's hammer. Hard.

I'm gonna go curl up in a corner now.