That was SO CUTE! I actually just finished reading the 3rd book in the series, when I happened to stumble upon this amazing fanfiction... and truly, this story is fantastic! The characterization is practically spot on! And you ended in a perfect spot too. Also, your writing style is awesome, and very complimentary to the characters and story. Thank you for writing this. It certainly made me smile...

Oh my gosh please don't listen to those haters their just jealous. This story is AMAZING!

Very sweet! Feels like I am reading this straight from the books. Love it!

I love this, it fits so well with their characters and I want to read more from you.

Gabi is...

Hey could you do one with Gabi and Luca? I really liked this one. :)

Your story is incredible so far! I love the way wrote it! Thanks so much for sharing it! But... I would REALLY REALLY love it if you added more! And, haha, I have those nights allll da time ;) but PLEASE continue it!

This was really good! There's only a handful of fanfics from this series, you must continue! It was soo cute!

oh my gosh... PLEASE WRITE MORE! I love this series and you have made my day making Gabi pregnant... SO AMAZING!

Please update ! Also you might want to put in a line or extra spacing between when she discovers she's pregnant to when she's in labour bc I got confused and i'm sure others might. Great story, love he idea!

That was so cute!

Great, except for the fact that her mum never went back in the 'tunnel' as far as i knew - but i might be wrong, ive only read 'waterfall' and Gabi and Lia's dad is dead. but otherwise good :) Should add a line of - thought between when she finds out she's with child and when she starts to give birth :) Cool

very well written, though it was heavy on dialogue.