I think that the next victim should be one of the professors or draco Malloy.

yo should this thing keep going, it's a bit over the top but a good read. i enjoyed it

The story is great, pity you stoped their

Hey, HURRY UP AND UPPPPPPDAAAAAAAAATE!

this is great! Add some more chapters!

hope not as i get the feeling that harry potter would be angry if that happened.

I mean for crying out loud, the kid used wind to push Quirrel’s flames back into him. Why not just use a stronger gust and push Quirrel into a wall hard enough to knock him out?

Again with the unnecessarily complex battles. You’ve made Harry so overpowered that to have interesting battles you had to sacrifice consistency, he could have suffocated or drowned him again. Also.. did you really just claim someone was fast enough to dodge a bolt of lightning?

You made the fight with the troll unnecessarily difficult and complex. He’s supposed to be smart, no? Why didn’t he just suffocate or drown it?

Ooh, I hope you realised that you’ve just made it seem like Fred and George are also in on Albus’ plan. If you play them off as actually decent people, I’ll wonder why they didn’t get suspicious about how Molly, Ron and maybe Ginny were acting at the station.

Lmfao dude what kind of f-ing fanfiction is this. Everyone is acting so childish. And you are literslly bashing everyone. Is this even considered a Harry Potter fanfic. Wait i got youre probably a angry ravenclaw or a wussy slytherin.

i like it please continue

This has got to be the longest two (2) weeks in history - it is actually forty-six (46)months.

Please update this story soon or we shall be thinking that it has been abandoned.

-Mark

this is fantastic! and yes let her get petrified!

not a bad story, but it seems to me that harry is OP, also you made several people over reacting, an stuck in a single opinion, sorry if this upsets you