Lol, she cheesed the field boss.

This is really great, but it's a shame this hasn't been updated in a long time...

Amazing story, and I love how Heathcliff and Kuradeel actually have personalitiesKeep up the great work!

Wow, this is getting slowly darker nice change probably the first SAO fic I read that is dark themed totally has my atention now will read till the end.

Ok this indeed looks intresting will read it intrested or not since it looks like a good plot twist for SAO things will definitly be diferent. can't say much since is the very first chapter.

Regards

I really like the plot of this story! I hope you update agin sometime so we can see where you plan to take this story.

What's gives you the audacity not to update the wonderful story

for once in my life I've found someone who developed Kayaba's character in a good way ~

I don't mean to be impatient but when is kirito going to end up with Sachi already. Jeez! LOL.

Please update:)

Great story. It is it dead or still goi g because you hav t updated in forever and I want more...it helps that I love sa hi and kirito pairing...anyway I love it but unless the story is dead please update!

Pair sachi and kirito your dragging it out wayyyyy to much. Otherwise great story

This is a really great story! I'm really impressed with your writing style, as well as how the plot is developing. I must confess that while I was reading this, I thought at one point that Kirito and Sachi were going to end up together, no questions asked. You've surprised me many times and I've taken quite a liking to this story. I have to say, I have no idea what will happen next or how things will turn out, but I hope that I will continue to be impressed. You have put a lot of effort into this story and I cannot wait to read more. Will Sachi, the Iron Steel Wall, continue to change? And will it be in a negative or positive way? SAO through her eyes is exciting, to say the least, and I really have no words that would do this story justice. It is wonderful, though! Try to update again soon! I look forward to it!

I just discovered this today, and I absolutely loved it! Please continue and update soon. Your characterizations are brilliant, your speeches are top notch, your writing skill is superb (especially the action and the emotional/romance/fluffy scenes) and I could imagine this really happening in SAO. I've always longed to read a story which portrays Heathcliff in a positive light. I hope he stays a hero, or at least if he is revealed to be Kayaba then let him die a hero (or have some kind of healface turn?). I started shipping Heathcliff/Sachi at one point lol. Anyway it's your story, take it in whatever direction yoi wish; I'm sure it'll be amazing! Love this, can't wait for the next update!

This style...

Argo the Rat is a LN-only character, as her role was minimized in the anime. Your writing style is reminiscent of Tap, Teh Ping, or Pryun, the key translators of SAO on Baka-Tsuki before they were taken down.

Well done...? If I may ask...were you inspired by them, was it a similar writing style, or...are you one of them? Teh Ping is from Singapore...

It is a monstrously good story, and one which is truly interesting to follow. Sachi acting in the same manner as Asuna did, combining the same type of manual attack, while crossing over somewhat with Log Horizon...it really is beautiful to read. I am looking forward to reading more as it unfolds.

Kind of looks like Argo is a little drunk as well as Agil.