It weirds me out how she refers to him as “boy” and says “good boy” etc. anyway, I like it so far aside from the grammatical errors. You did warn us though, so I knew there would be errors coming in.

I really just want to point out this part:
Kyoko: I'm an adult capable of taking care of myself
Hiei: You almost died
Kyoko: I'm a human

Yes, which is why you should go outside knowing there are demons after your life. _

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. What a mature and capable adult. You have a bodyguard for a reason, human.

That was awesome. Thank u for writing this.

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This was sooo good! I really hope u do a sequel!

It's good, But you don't tip in Japan. That's my only thing.

I like the scene, not her action though.
You shouldn't do it with a partner, think like if the characters are reversed, and he was the one only teasing her and playing with her sentiments, it would be frown upon. Great story by the way, I don't know if I like or not her personality, but that goes for every person so, who knows maybe knowing her better in the future I will have a better opinion about her.

Thanks for the story!

yes send his punk ass there and let Toguro beat him and rape him then kill him lol

a sex movie lol saw that coming lol but that's funny the waiter reminded me of Tamaki from ohshc

Hello I just want to say I have read this story so many times I know it nearly off by heart. I just can't remember what chapter Kyoko marks Hiei, if you could tell me that would be great _

Good story but I would like it noted that the piano in her room would have been out of tune unless her family had it tuned before she came home and the one at Genkai's with it being in an abandoned room as it is it would have been so horribly out of tune.

I though yomi was a bat demon?

Love it, and i can't wait for the sequel. I want to see mini Hiei's.

Hello! I would like to do a fanfic Kurama and Yukina and q are few !
please! PD: I loved the fanfic Hiei and Kyoko q exists. Thank you!

pb