what happened to Archers left leg that it needed to be removed?
all-in-all I find the plot for this story interesting, but while it wasn't badly written it wasn't well written either.
I hope your newer stories will be better in this.

since when does a solid projectile weapon have an energy beam?

don't you mean the Earth compound on Vulcan?

you really have problems with the word "not". you rarely usevthe right one. for example from this chapterI didn't many questionable..." that should have been a "did"

Why is it your stories Star fleet magically gets access to tech they needed allies for? Shields being a big one. They just seem to magically spawn stuff they needed allies for out of their butts.

Magnificent story. I read it in an afternoon and long evening. Well done.

Interesting. A different perspective. I liked it but I really wish you'd go back and do a season six of the original series

You need a beta. There are times sentences don't make sense either because they are missing words or just the wrong word altogether.

Earth going from barley sustaining warp 5.2 to 7.2 in your timescale is not believable. Pushing it up to 7.5 is absurd. Kirks Enterprise a century later could only do warp 8 in small bursts.

Very well written story. A few typos through me off but I'm glad I found this. Don't know how I missed it before when I first started looking for Trip/T'Pol fics.

Great fic really enjoyed the read. Love a good Tnt fic

There were a few typing/spelling errors though, a Beta read would do wonders i think.

Nice story, some typos here or there, but that is acceptable in the long run, in my opinion :)

I am wondering though, why did you stop the story right here? There seems to be a lot you could talk about in the future... It is unfortunate, that you stopped here

Very interesting story. The TnT interactions are especially well done.

Wow, good writing, but he just left without finding out where the humans came from or went. Why would he let the Orions go? Pirates need to die, else they will attack innocents.

I just finish reading this story, and all I can say is, it's damn good story!

This is a great story. When will it continue? I hope soon.