Reviews for Merlin's Anger |
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wesann19dew chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE |
Harper Rose Mitchell chapter 1 . 3/17/2013 TAKE THAT, UTHER! |
me chapter 1 . 1/16/2013 This is cool |
Violentshadow chapter 1 . 1/18/2012 EPIC! |
The Disorganization chapter 1 . 5/26/2011 wow... just wow... so true so awesome... |
Scribbles111 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010 nice, its simple, straight to, and i like it, no idea y, i just like it...its one of them u just do! lool! from 13 |
the Goddess of Purple Coats chapter 1 . 6/23/2004 You cocky miscreant, Uther! *laughs* Certainly suits him. |
Codfather chapter 1 . 10/9/2003 Very cool. |
Night Flyer chapter 1 . 7/29/2003 well, i thought it was a very good poem. you did an excellent job of capturing merlin's feelings that night and throughout the first few chapters of the book. i applaude you! |
Stella chapter 1 . 5/12/2003 Cool -_- |
amiwakawaiidesu chapter 1 . 10/6/2002 As usual with your writing, a great strength of this piece is emotional intensity. One specific device that's very effective is the splitting of relatively short sentences into separate lines (e.g., "Can't you see the blood/Pouring from my wounded wrist?"); that device produces an effect suggestive of a speaker who is angry, or hurt, or-at any rate-short of breath. The effect is dramatic and skillfully done. |
Fire Pendant chapter 1 . 9/28/2002 Thnk you soo much for reviewing! My first review. I'm not coming back to Irish Sorry sorry sorry! Please read my other story and e- mail me sometime |
Chronic Daydreamer chapter 1 . 9/22/2002 I liked it, it showed a lot of true emotion that spun itself directly from the book and gives you something to add. Thanks for a good read. |
Lune Luna chapter 1 . 9/21/2002 Very Accurate for the time period it is placed, the wording fits into place, but one thing bothers me.. I cant quite place it though.. |
Crystal-Velvet chapter 1 . 9/21/2002 cool |