Well that is just ick, if Harry and Elana get married the Albus will be sleeping with his step sister...

They were having an affair for two years when they both were married with children, hell they had cheated before together before the affair and he is honestly wondering why Harry is cold to him and that bitch Ginny

I think it's a novel approach. There are Ginny-cheats-on-Harry stories galore out there but usually blood is thicker than wedding rings. Even if Hermione is often on Harry's side, the rest of the Weasels side with their blood family member how ever in the wrong they might be. Same with Ronald-cheats-on-Hermione stories. Even Ronald-and-Ginny-cheat-on-Hermione-and-Harry-with-each-other stories. Who cares about incest taboos? They're purebloods...

I'm very curious. This story as a whole doesn't make sense. Ginny had everything love, money, kids, lover that did a lot of stuff. Then she turned to a guy that was nothing. Wasn't a good lover, no money. Honestly I don't get this.

I enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you.

So far your story, is a little dull. There’s a good amount of information and details, but the emotional connection with the characters is a bit lacking. I’m not trying to be mean, you’re a lot better writer than some others I’ve read. No obvious grammar or spelling mistakes. Other than that I do like the story. I hope you enjoy writing and continue to do so. :)

I honestly was really enjoying it until the whole Elana part. I think it would have been fine without her.

Enjoyed reading this one again a second time, I didn’t check to see if I left a review previously though.

Absolutely wonderful story!

Yes, my name is Alana, and I only review at the end of the story. This is because if I review, it means I enjoyed the story since I got to the end. Anyway, I loved the storyline, the plot, the everything! It was so interesting! Also:
Ginny : You cant get your kids back, deal with it. Get your own kids with Wood. You didn't deserve Harry or Lily or James or Albus. You just wanted fame.
Oliver : Just because you wanted a good name you had a wife and children. What is wrong with you? You didn't deserve Elena or Sally or Sarah or Kevin or Oscar!

This was a FANTASTIC story. I have REALLY enjoyed reading it, and I am hoping that maybe you would write a sequel to it? Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.

"occlumense"
Legilimency is the one you use to read minds, also it's spelled Occlumency

His son has been dating someone for 2 years and he didn't know? That's just ridiculous.

Please don't use apostrophes to denote speech, it makes your writing more difficult to read.
Use double quotation marks instead as most of the world does.

Walls of text, and it could use some proofreading, noticed a number of awkwardly worded sentences and incorrect grammar.