Reviews for Achilles Heel
Littlebodygrumpyheart chapter 1 . 7/8
oh come on! you gotta finish this story, don't leave us all hanging!
Kiki chapter 8 . 5/8
I sort of doubt you'll see this, 7 some years after you posted this, but I loved Legal Partners and desperately needed more of your Ace Attorney works. This is excellent, and its amazing! You're a fantastic writer!
Laluzi chapter 7 . 4/30
I have a ton of regrets on this story not being finished, but I'm still delighted to have these eight chapters. Legal Partners has you cemented as one of my absolute favorite writers in this fandom, if not -the- claimant of the top spot, but as much as I adore domestic slow-burn Narumitsu and idiot lawyers who can't figure out that their irrepressible lifelong gay is mutual (and I adore that a lot, for the record), I've got a weak spot for whump, especially when other characters flock around the one that's being driven up a tree. And this fic does a fantastic job illustrating just how devastatingly much Maya and Edgeworth care for Phoenix, to the point where even Angel Starr is backing off to make way for them...

...but the thing I really can't get enough of, and truly regret not having more of, is the way that Maya and Edgeworth come together here. It's beyond them being investigative partners, which is already a total blast I never knew I wanted; it's the way they comfort and ground each other in this situation. It's all absolutely wonderful to read. On the surface, it might look like Edgeworth's doing more for her - I love that he invited Maya to stay with him once he realized she was frightened - but that really isn't the case. Even with Pess underfoot, who I'm also joyous to see, the description of his home laid into the sort of regal, unlived emptiness I'd expect of him. If he didn't have Maya there to bounce ideas and make grandiose declarations of justice, he'd be driving himself completely insane with self-flagellation.

So yeah - came for the kidnapping, stayed for the Maya-Miles friendship. Even if there's only a few chapters of it, I'm thrilled it's there for me to read.
Hey we exist chapter 8 . 5/28/2019
Hey I dunno if you still use this account but the story isn’t dead, I can tell you that much. It’s the best ace attorney fanfic I have read in a while, but I just wanted to bring this to your attention. If you do decide to update it, try your best, please? I don’t care if it’s bad if you stopped writing. I just need to know the end, it’s like a cliff hanger. So yeah, this story exists
Guest chapter 8 . 5/28/2019
Omg! I wish you would finish this! I love this fanfic
Charli chapter 8 . 3/6/2018
Please finish this! It's great so far!
3dumplings3 chapter 8 . 5/30/2017
gaaaahhh the cliffy! and i am more than ok with slash. is this updated on the kink meme? link? i need to know what happens T_T
Jaddis chapter 8 . 1/3/2017
Just what I wanted: a Phoenix whump story without slash! Too bad you're never going to finish it. I would've liked to see Edgeworth's reaction when he saw Phoenix.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/9/2016
oh my god, this was amazing
Jonasan Joestar chapter 8 . 7/12/2016
Oh my goodness I dearly require an update or next chapter to this! It's so wonderful and amazing, I love it a lot!
DeathByFandom13 chapter 8 . 6/9/2016
Awesome!
And awful!
I'm drowning in all of my feels!
WHY THE FUCKING HELL DID YOU STOP WRITING THIS
Please keep on going, this is incredible!
HN9 chapter 8 . 5/22/2016
PLEASE FINISH THIS! I am BEGGING you! PLEASE! For the love of all things! And nothing! FINISH FINISH FINISH! PLEASEEEEEEEE!
TwiliWolf13 chapter 8 . 11/17/2015
I beg you to continue this! Please! For the good of the fandom! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/4/2015
no
nonono this hasn't been updated in YEARS pleasepleasepleasePLEASE DON'TLEAVE US ON A CLIFFHANGER
Guest chapter 8 . 7/4/2015
eek
whens the next chapter? between their investigations we can start to get an idea of where he is but we still need them to figure it out
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