| Reviews for Our Long Story |
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   Caroliny Hotchner chapter 23 . 2/7 Hi, how are you. I loved your story. |
| spk chapter 23 . 12/21/2016 I really liked this story idea, but I have to be honest...it was very hard to read. It was very confusing. It seemed to jump around and everything happened too fast. There were also many mistakes that made it hard to follow. Example: Prentiss texted JJ that she was getting married and wanted Christy as her MOH. JJ turned to Christy and said Emily was getting pregnant. And then in the same chapter you kept changing the spelling of Christy's name from y to ie. I kept reading because I love the idea of Hotch & JJ as a family, but it was a struggle. Sorry. |
| jenny crum chapter 22 . 11/29/2015 Yayyy they're a family again now |
| Snowbeardolphin chapter 20 . 10/16/2015 I had to start reading from the beginning again because I forget what chapter I left off at. I like how you wrote it, and look forward to reading more chapters. |
| Snowbeardolphin chapter 18 . 8/12/2015 I like how you wrote chapters one through 18, and I look forward to reading chapter 19, when it gets posted. |
| jenny crum chapter 17 . 4/27/2015 Awwww, I sooooo need more |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/15/2014 no se preocupe , tome su tiempo, gracias por sus historias , cuando este listo volvera mejor y mas fuerte ,, animo! |
| JJmyst chapter 12 . 5/4/2014 Luv it |
| jenny crum chapter 12 . 5/3/2014 I can't wait for more |
| jenny crum chapter 11 . 2/9/2014 I believe she is their daughter and I can't wait for more |
| red2013 chapter 10 . 1/14/2014 Good chapter to read. |
| red2013 chapter 9 . 11/4/2013 great family chapter. red |
| red2013 chapter 8 . 8/31/2013 great chapter so far |
| Fee-Hotch chapter 8 . 8/31/2013 Good story and this chapter was so good iodate soon :) |
| jenny crum chapter 7 . 8/13/2013 I can't wait for more |
