cool story

You cant stop like that, thats mean.
Ps. I loooveeed it!

Aww man! It can't be complete! I'm dying to know what their reactions would be!

I really liked the beginning of this fanfiction, although the ending seemed far to rushed for me to feel comfortable with it at the close of the story. I hope there's a sequel; you never delved into WHY the Doctor suddenly appeared, and why she's suddenly willing to tell Coulson and Clint everything with no reservations whatsoever. (I still think even if the doctor suddenly appeared, River would want to keep parts of her life strictly to herself- spoilers, you know. It is simply who she is.)

In any case the writing and characterizations are pretty solid, so this was a worthwhile if very short fanfiction to read!

This was fabulous. You should have gotten a lot more reviews than you did, and I'm really glad you kept it going till the end. Well done.

Ah! You're going to update right? Cliffhangers...

I'm loving this story, and I can't wait for the next update as you can probably tell :D

Keep up the amazing work,
MrsDalek

This is a beautifully well written story. And an amazing au crossover fanfic. I hope this isn't the last chapter, you could do so much more. I want to know exactly how this river differs from the other one. And if she ever makes amends with her parents and the doctor. Thank you :)

This is really good. River is really mysterious, and I like that.

Very cool story! Normally I am a hardcore River/11 shipper (it is my OTP), but I am really liking this. That's a bit weird too, 'cause normally I don't like Hawkeye either. Anyways, keep up the good work and update again soon!