Reviews for Opposing Emotions |
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vampygurl402 chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 please update |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/22/2016 please update soon ! this is great! |
cupid'slove chapter 2 . 12/2/2015 So I'm guessing you aren't going to finish this? Such a disappointment I was so Hoping there would be another chapter by now. |
Arken47 chapter 3 . 4/4/2015 Well it looks like you didn't get twenty five reviews... What if I just say "please more" twenty five times, will that work? PLEASE MORE. |
Komodo Butterfly chapter 3 . 11/6/2014 I like this however for the amount of reviews you're asking for I think you really need to make your chapters longer. |
TheCatsMeow8562 chapter 3 . 9/13/2014 im really enjoying this story! please update soon! |
moobs chapter 3 . 9/13/2014 I would love! if this was updated! its sooooooooooooooooo good! and i cant wait for more! update update update! |
cupid'slove chapter 3 . 9/11/2014 I do like where this is heading but I think you may want to proofread because I say a lot of missing words and double sentences. It's not bad I'm just saying so you know. I do look forward to the next chapter though :) |
darysnape chapter 2 . 8/10/2014 Me gusta tu historia :) |
The Honor Roll chapter 3 . 8/3/2014 I really like your story! I haven't checked out your other ones yet, but I like the start of this one! Oh and I like that you're making lily all jealous of severus of having friends :D |
hikora chapter 3 . 7/29/2014 That *****! The first friend should help the other with making MORE friends, not CHASE them OFF! And IDIOT JAMES POTTER! If you really like Sev, then be a man and say it, rather than hide behind everything and try to please everyone. There's a saying: if you try to please everyone, you'll please no one-at least that's how I think it is. Poor Sev. He really is too nice for his own good sometimes. I just hope that he and James can get together like they both wanted, with James still being able to keep his friends(The Marauders). Please update soon! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/28/2014 Please updat |
Asou chapter 3 . 7/28/2014 I like your story (for me Sev should be more asertive but it;s still great ). I realy like how you picture Lily - I always thought that she isn't such a good girl :) hope the next chapter will be within week :D Realy good job :) |
hikora chapter 2 . 2/21/2014 Poor Sev! Why did James have to do that?! It's not fair! He already apologized! Please continue. I want to read about when they r finally together. |
TheDragonMarauder chapter 1 . 1/4/2014 I really love this story plot, and can't wait to read the next chapter, but I just have a couple helpful comments. When someone is speaking, and someone answers them, the second persons text goes in a new paragraph. Otherwise, I thought it was really amazing, and think that you are a goo 'humble beginner at writing' |