| Reviews for Betrayl at twilight |
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   jliu1128 chapter 20 . 5/10/2017 I've always hated Bella. |
| Olivia0707 chapter 1 . 2/5/2016 you continue that is the answer love it |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/27/2015 your a good writer. |
| Will chapter 1 . 8/28/2015 Do you even know the meaning of the word capitalize? How can you not know something so simple? Do you know how stupid I think you are right now? Do you know how many people have probably ditched this story not because of poor plot or character development but because the author made reading it too irritating to continue. |
| crazyfanno1 chapter 6 . 8/29/2015 Im risking sounding mean, but in Hp fred died not george. |
| Sraya chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 I love the Buffy you added hoping the rest is is interestin |
| Starlightnight34 chapter 4 . 4/3/2014 I just notice that you haven't said anything about how Edward looks like Cedric |
| angelofheaven001 chapter 20 . 9/12/2013 loved it. |
| Love Faith Embers chapter 20 . 9/9/2013 Good story. |
| Mari Wollsch chapter 20 . 9/9/2013 Great, Amazing story, loved it xxxxx |
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/6/2013 Nice. |
| Penny is wise chapter 20 . 9/8/2013 Awesome ending to an awesome story. I'm glad you didn't end it with Ivory dead. |
| hitomi65 chapter 20 . 9/8/2013 Great ending |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 20 . 9/8/2013 I like it! ** |
| harryfansuper chapter 20 . 9/7/2013 This is a much better ending thank you :) |
