Reviews for Luminous Arcs, The Tale of A Knight's Twin
Maglyt1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Interesting, I currently had not much of an opinion on Rulia. But she has a lot of potential to grow! I love how you kept up with the arm names XD Pretty funny. Well I wish you luck.
Mitsumi Hanazono chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
First off, why has no one else reviewed this? I know the LA fanbase is a bit small, but eh, I'm happy there's one at all.

I really do like the concept of the fic and Rulia seems like a really interesting character, and seems to be the polar opposite of her twin. I really interested in where you're going to go with her place in the story and her reaction to Chapter 9 and 11's events (especially 11) are going to be really interesting to see.

Just make sure you don't turn Rulia into a Mary-sue. As much as I love the LA series, I don't want to see OC fics with Mary-sues. She doesn't seem like one so far, but just remember to keep her realistic in some ways and give her flaws as well, maybe some relateable to your readers.

In short, keep it up and I can't wait to see more. Also, when I get my Tri-LA series Self-Insert up, look at it, why don't ya?