lol, Kyoko pulled off the gloves in this one. o.o

great. I'm blubbering, and sneezing, and trying to peel glued bits of fluff out of my hair... and as usual, absolutely delighted at your story and writing style! much love!

This ainu stuff is interesting...much like Native Americans. I'm going to need to look into that. it makes sense that other countries would have trampled indigenous, I guess? it makes me wonder what other displaced cultures there were, and what can be brought back. (My dear husband is native American, and this stuff interests me, greatly...) thank you so much, for new information to gather, and people to study. I love real information to increase knowledge, sewn into fiction.

I love the amount of character growth, and depth of personality you have put into your characters. having some nice ones, turn snotty, is expected in this layout... but having some question themselves, and consider paths they never did before, is very deep. you have wonderful and unique insight into both, skip beat styles, and human nature. it's very refreshing to read your writing, because of that.

Lol, I wish they'd convince honoka to stay, just to edge out some of those whiny cats... (I had much stronger words, but I hate when my reviews give away too much, to incoming readers..lol).

I'm about three hundred words in and I already want to kiss you, fellow writer, for writing this masterpiece.

I don't know if you know this or not but the author of skip beat also wrote a manga with a similar plot line to the one you mentioned in this chapter (18) where a girl who is the daughter of a police chief is forced to work as a body guard for a young Yakuza boss. It's called "Tokyo crazy paradise" and I highly suggest you read it because the main heroine is kick a**

Awwwe cute, what a way to end a great story

What a great way to propose

Wow, Absolutely magical. The moments with the two are just amazing. Love how you wrote about everyone watching them. Did she just say "NO"!?

Red string of fate

Im so glad the birthday went well.

That was ADORABLE!

OH MY GOSH! That soo CUUUUTE! The way he sang as they danced together, and they kissed! They are honestly SO PERFECT for each other. Still cant believe the film crew didnt get that.

Yaay Kuu there too