It was never finished? what I read though was pretty good.

I really love your fanfiction please update again 're the only person who has written a Toby/OC out of all fanfictions for Listener and it's really please please update again soon!

This is very good. And actually it's the first Listener fic I've read.

Good god this is horrible! I mean the events within thei story, as for the fanfic of Toby and the OC, well, this is pretty fabulous...not to mention the writing it self is pretty damn good. I mean actually good, it's amazing how bad writing can be as far as fanfiction goes, and some times literature, well now adays anyway.
Either way, please continue with your story, it is really good, so keep up! :D

This is a great beginning to what will be a story to remember. You left us in suspense and hoping for a new chapter. Very well written. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oooh, please update soon! I love this fandom, and especially with the Season 4 almost over, I need something to keep me going when it does!

Poor Cassidy indeed. I am glad you posted another chapter to this story. I hope that you write more during your trip West.

I love it, please update soon!

Nice, I love this so far I like the suspense and the time rewind. I love the Listener and am working on fic and am so glad someone else loves this fandom too.

I'm so glad someone finally posted a new story for this show, I was planning to after I finish my PoI story... And you story starts well, I hope Oz will be in there more often, I just love him