Hahaha! That was hilarious! Loki is so cute!

omg that was great

I'm not sure if this was intended, but I imagined the baby's as Utahraptors, and that just made it even more funny.

xD
So adorable. I wonder if they were his by birth or not. I guess it doesn't really matter in Loki's eyes. He raised them from eggs, therefore, they were his :)

Thank you for writing this.

LOL this was funny

"There, um... there." Haha, one of the most confused comfortings ever! Well said Thor, well said. :)

Aaaawww. It's so cute in a vaguely creepy way. I LOVE IT!

I really liked this story; the mental image of Loki as a mother duck raptor equivalent especially. I liked how in the last scene, the dichotomy in Loki's personality is clear: a mix of inscrutable/powerful and vulnerable. Have you seen Tales of Asgard?

haha Thor can only wonder!

Thanks for the laugh. I have tonsillitis and needed some cheering up :)

I'm as bewildered as Thor, but certainly entertained.

Hee! This was awesome. And yes, I bet it always was worth paying attention.
Such a great story, I love Thor's bewilderment. How he can never be sure when Loki's pulling his leg. And of course Loki's a wonderful mother hen. Haha, still laughing here.

Hahahaha... Ehm... not even sure if it is supposed to be funny with these 'raptors' flying around... But Loki's reactions, words and UNIQUE behaviour... oh-so-Loki-sh, in a way... : )... Amazing... : ) Thank you for a fine story and for making me smile like this...

Can I hug you? Seriously? Thor's "there, there" had me cracking up. And Loki's a sneaky one.
I'm going to go laugh myself to sleep...

Lol great story