bah Lucy you're still allowed to be uncomfy with it
so frustrating

I loved this story and how it has proceeded, it's sweet knowing how it was inspired

Can I fuckin' slap Lucy?! She again over-reacted.

Hi, interesting story.

Thanks for your hard work.

In the future, work on your sentence structure; you have a LOT of run-on sentences.

The part with Gajeel and Erza's punishment also seemed rather dragged out, at least to me. One or two costume changes would have been sufficient to get the idea and the humor.

Also, you don't need to answer so many comments in the A/N section. A lot of people find it annoying, especially since it makes this story's word count seem a third, if not a whole fifty percent longer than it actually is. It's padding, and essentially unnecessary.

Thanks again for the hard work, I know it's not easy to publish a full story.

M. C.

Really enjoyed it

I love this story. Satisfies my nalu cravings!

this was adorable and a quite believable tale for them! I liked ur mating and Mark that was awesome! thanks for sharing!

I want to thank you for your story. It is very well thought out and written. I enjoyed every moment you wrote about. Being a little reckless in my early twenties, I understood Lucy not wanting to settle so quickly. I’m not saying people who marry young did it wrong, I in fact I think it’s romantic for any two people no matter the age to get married and devote their life to each other. It was just something I wanted to wait to do. I had a lot of growing up to do before I met my husband. So thank you for having them wait. Thank you for changing it from T to M because I might have never discovered your great works. I love M stories that have great plot lines with angst and humor. Most importantly thank you for the author’s note. It was fun to read about your inspiration and your background.

Even though Evergreen was never mentioned i can still hear her. Lol

It is avery nice chapter, with the right emotions.

This is one of if not the best fic I have read so far with this pairing! Amazing from beginning to end. Made me laugh, shed tears, and go through the whole range of emotions. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this one. :D

This is brilliant! I love it so much ahahahahahaha. :D

Oh the crazy mind of a Happy.

Actualy it can be either Gray or Grey. In Canada they spell it with an 'e' but in America it's with an 'a'.
Anyway, I love this story so much! Keep up the good work, 'cause it pays off :D

It's Levy not Levi but again love the story so far.