Reviews for The Moon is peering in through the Prison Bars
KitoH chapter 18 . 3/6/2019
This was a fantastic story. It had everything needed.
The growing relationship went at a believable pace, unlike some stories which rush it. The idea is brilliant on its on but the thing I love is how I felt everything the characters felt. If Bunny was angry, I was angry. If Jack was scared, I was scared.
And the execution part was probably the best part. I believe it was chapter 14 in which you stated it had been 4 days since the execution. Until that point, I thought something would prove him innocent at the last minute and I was crying. When Groundhog revealed his part, I was so upset that Bunny had been killed for something he hadn’t done. Then you revealed that it was an elaborate scheme to prove his innocence.
You, my friend, are extremely talented, and I will definitely be looking at your other works.
~KitoH
un-named-2019 chapter 2 . 7/21/2017
According to my cousin, prison sucks. He has another ten years if he's good.
Thanatophobia kills chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
I kinda feel like it was Babette or 'groundhog' who were behind the poisoning I FUCKING KNEW IT! I WOULD FUCKING TEAR OFF HOGS DICK AND MAKE HIM FUCK HIMSELF WITH IT! THEN MAKE HIM EAT HIS OWN SHIT COVERED PHALLIS! THAT BLODDY TWATFUCKFACE!
Thanatophobia kills chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
I kinda feel like it was Babette or 'groundhog' who were behind the poisoning I FUCKING KNEW IT! I WOULD FUCKING TEAR OFF HOGS DICK AND MAKE HIM FUCK HIMSELF WITH IT! THEN MAKE HIM EAT HIS OWN SHIT COVERED PHALLIS! THAT BLODDY TWATFUCKFACE!
Fangirl309 chapter 17 . 1/21/2017
Te felicito muy buen Fanfic, llore :v Enserio estuvo estupendo!
Fangirl309 chapter 13 . 1/20/2017
H-he is alive? Oh good Lord HE IS ALIVE! Ooohh I don't know if cry or laugh! You are a freaking mastermind!
Fangirl309 chapter 12 . 1/20/2017
Noooo! What have you Done!?
Fangirl309 chapter 7 . 1/20/2017
Someone tell me why I can take the smut as nothing, but when I read fluff: blushes, smiles like an idiot and giggles all around
Fangirl309 chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
Dios, diganme enferma pero amo esto! Este tipo de historias es lo primero que busco!
Jess chapter 18 . 9/2/2016
Best fanfic I have ever read you are seriously amazing
Siri chapter 3 . 1/11/2016
Ok, now he reminds me of Laughing Jack. XD
excusemeforamoment chapter 3 . 11/5/2015
i live next to a prison and they are really nice to the prisoners there; they grow food, watch tv, play footie ect. its adorable actually
Guest chapter 13 . 10/25/2015
I was crying my eyes out the entire chapter. Lol I'm so sad and happy but still pissed.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2015
NOOOOOOOOOOO I DEMAND GROUNDHOG VE SHIVED IN THE KIDNEY! BUNNY NOOOO!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/25/2015
Jack getting wall molested and lunch time raped. -sobs violently- the story is so good though. I like how all the characters fall into faith tale characters
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