Reviews for PEACOCK PRINCE: TITBIT |
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![]() ![]() Please update, don't leave this unfinished |
![]() ![]() ![]() RIKI U WERE NEVER FAT |
![]() ![]() ![]() RIKI U R SO MEAN |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT SO MUCH ITS FABULOUS AND AMAZING AND I LOVE IT SO VERY MUCH RIKI U AREN'T FAT OR UGLY U R PERFECT |
![]() ![]() ![]() POOR RIKI |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT SO MUCH ITS FANTASTIC AND AWESOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT SO MUCH ITS FABULOUS AND AMAZING AND I LOVE IT SO VERY MUCH |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't have OCD but I have perfectionist tendacies so I can relate on some levels. I'm glad you aren't ashamed of your OCD or perfectionism as these are both things which can help you become successful in life and while they can control you you can also control them and turn them into the ultimate positive rather than letting then be a negative thing. Anyway, I enjoyed this capsule a lot it puts into perspective the extent of the cruelty of Iason. To make a mani/peti more painful than it already is while also embarassing Riki by binding him to furniture in a public setting for no reason at all. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this one makes me feel like it marks a turning point in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting saying. Is it a real one or made up/modified for the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way some of the words are all caps say volumes about the state of mind of Riki. To some it'll come off as if they stumbled upon a chapter of a story written by someone who lacks common gramatical, spelling and punctuational sense, but it would also make them curious about what the story's about and why its written this unique way. |
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