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Guest chapter 17 . 2/26/2018 Name: Puppeteer Human age: 16 Gender: Female Species: Unicorn Personality:Sadistic, bubbly, always smiling Appearance: Bronze coat with black wavy mane and one orange streak on her tail, has a leg brace on her left front leg Cutie Mark: A voodoo doll with x-ed out eyes and a nail through it's heart Strengths: higher ground, can use magic pretty well, uses strings to ensnare her opponent Weaknesses: Being knocked over (it's harder to get back up) Important things/parts of life: Equipment: Scythe, spears (to finish the prey off if she's bored) Endurance: Above Average Speed: Average Strength: Average Intelligence: High Skill: High Defense: Average Will: Very Good Experience: Very Good Reflexes: High Dexterity: High Flexibility: High Accuracy: about 70% with other spells, strings always hit the target, |
JamesFames chapter 16 . 6/11/2015 I'm really liking these fights and really do hope you update soon. Looking forward to more awesome fights |
Tison Valane chapter 17 . 12/21/2014 Do the OCs have to be a pony? |
Overlord Sombra chapter 17 . 12/13/2014 that was an awesome battle. sure my OC lost, but he went down like a boss! |
TechnologicalTerror chapter 15 . 12/11/2014 I talked to absolom about AU |
JamesFames chapter 17 . 12/10/2014 I'm really liking these fight. They just keep getting better everyday. Keep up the awesome work! |
TechnologicalTerror chapter 17 . 12/9/2014 its been a while since i read this, hey, and keep it up |
AlexTHedgehog chapter 17 . 12/7/2014 Here's my OC - Name: Night Feather Human Age: 17 Gender: Male Species: Kirin Personality: His outside appearance gives off a serious and threatening look but inside he gentle and caring to the ones who he loves the most. Having fierce will to fight for those around no matter how tough his opponent are. He thinks creatively when put his plans into action as well as determined to get it done. For a pony/dragon hybrid, he's bigger and taller than any other stallions. His face shows no emotions as he gives the most blankest expressions ever and when anger, his eyes will make the Stare look weak compared to him. he does not show any mercy to his enemy as he will execute them whilst enrage. Appearance: Black mane, dark gray coat, dragon wings with light gray membrane, and long tail ending with a arrow head, a head taller than Big Mac, black fur along his back, a scar over his right eye, dragon-like teeth, a horn that curves upwards, and his eyes are blood-red irises, green sclera, and slit pupils. Cutie mark: Image of a cresent moon and a feather, giving an impression that he is nocturnal as well. Likes the pony: Twilight Sparkles Strength: Invisibility, Hoof-to-hoof combatant, supeb swimmer, lethal fire breath, swordsmenship, magic bolts, healing factor, and quick learner. Weaknesses: Letting his animal instinct kick in, tends to go on a blind rage if friends are seriously injured, having his killer half take his body. Important facts: Born an orphan in Neighpon, he traveled to Equestria to find a better home but has been adopted by the originals rulers at the Crystal Empire King Sombra and Queen Chrysalis (Krystal Clear back then) as their own. He never got out much due to him being different than other fillies and colts his age. His mother would usual tend to him whenever he's in pain or hurt, while his father would train him to use magic in order to fend off other empires and play around with him. One day, Queen Krystal disappeared on her way to meet with the king and queen of Canelot. King Sombra and Prince Night waited for her for months expecting her to be back and eventually Night give up know she probably died during a snow storm but this drove King Sombra insane. This insanity caused him to find a book on dark spells to use to make the kingdom strong. Night learned about this and stop him but Sombra struck Night in his right eye, which made him fear his father. Regretting his action, he try to comfort Night but instead Night runaway from the empire, never to look back. Night decided to run to the place he knows best, Canelot. There he was adopted after he explained what happen at the Crystal Empire and met his step-sisters, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna, which will lead him through many adventures with the Main Six in later years. Equipment: Double-wielding katanas. Endurance: Good Speed: High Strength: Above Average Intelligence: High Skill: Above Average Defense: Average Will: Very Good Experience: Very Good Reflexes: High Dexterity: Good Flexibility: Above Average Accuracy: Average |
Absolom of Avalon chapter 17 . 12/7/2014 Sorry for all the grammar problems guys. I saw more than I wanted to in this particular chapter, I should've read through it and edited it more carefully. I hope it's still good enough to enjoy though. Anyway, I really do hope you enjoyed the fight and don't forget to review and all that jazz. See ya next time guys, rest easy 'till then. |
SonofDeath chapter 15 . 11/7/2014 Nice fight, arrogance always loses in the end no matter how powerful they are, charger held none, he used his "engineering and insticts" as you said, he used clever tricks in order to keep himself alive long enough to win, that is why us so called mortals are not to be underestimated. Anyway, before I start rambling about how humans and other mortal being alike are a force to be reckoned with, lets move on. I that was an amazing fight and in a way not a surprising way for it to end, I hope that you use my oc Black Shadow and that his fight will be a good one. I wonder who else is going to be fighting in this tournament and if Hard Charger will be fighting another opponent anytime soon. Come to think of it, what is going to happen with all the winners? Will the fight for championship or something, maybe if that happens. something like when the last two or three contesters will challenge Umbra and those other two to a fight, since those three will be the only ones that could be them. If Neo had won in that case I was able to see him fighting the demonic one of those three, but I can see Charger fighting Umbra and the other two, along side one or two other champions like him. But if that does happen and if Hard Charger dies later on, who will be the champions to fight those guys and "bring peace back to that world"? Only time will tell, see ya next chapter and hope that you use Black Shadow. |
Guest chapter 15 . 9/17/2014 Awesome fight! Please write more chapters! |
endertrree chapter 1 . 9/6/2014 If you still want ocs Name:End nature Human age:14 Gender:female Species:drawolfion dragon-wolf I made it up if not just a Pegasus Personality:happy crazy in a good way and kind has a difrent personality which is calm and evil insane Appearance:wolf body , grey fur(coat) with cyan fur from top of the paw to knees, purple dragons wings and dragon horns and dragon tail with purple and blue mane silver neaklace with a end crystal ( this crystal helps the flow of magic often a mesmerizing purple with hints of black can only be mad by my of) Cutie Mark:a crystal(end crystal) dagger with black tribal wings behind the dagger Strengths:can use some spells and can breath - fire-light-water-pure magic-hope- and fly Weaknesses:Cant be alone "breaks down" loyal to a fault-when someone she cares about she takes there wounds and goes besrk/ overkill mode) Important things/parts of life:abused as a "pup" trains ruthlessly Equipment:wing blades crystal necklace that controls the flow of magic threw her body and uses her claws which are coated in silver |
Curt DaHurt chapter 15 . 8/27/2014 Holy crap...that was fricken' amazing. I'm a little bit disappointed though, even though Hard Charger won, he got completely manhandled by Neo Moon. But I understand that he doesn't have special powers like his opponent, so I'm cool with him getting a major beat down. P.S. This battle was awesome [if I haven't said that already] if all the battles of the tournament are like this then sign me up for the favorite/follow club! |
Absolom of Avalon chapter 15 . 8/27/2014 100th REVIEW! YEAH! |
GTJynxx chapter 1 . 8/27/2014 Awesome story idea! I haven't read one like this before. If my ON gets a chance to a bloody bath, here's her info. Keep up the awesome work! OC by SweetStunnaDaze Name- Persephone Species-Unicorn Physical Attributes-Fast on her feet, resemblance of Fleur De Lis, capable of using magic. Cutie mark- half sun and half moon, consisting of sun blaze on one half and small stars on the other. Appearance- Solid white unicorn with flowing mane. Colors are light to dark blue, purple and shades of pink. Bio-Persephone's father Siren and her mother's maiden name of Charm, gave the hint detail of what Persephones talent would be. Capable of sensing both dark and light energy, while creating both positive and negative magic using the elements around her, she aims for using her talent for the good of Equestria instead of wrecking havoc. If you want a better description you can look at her main story "Trapped in the Past", the first few chapters will give better detail. Good luck everypony! ;) |