Oh my god i love this so much its so perfect and beautiful and romantic and arrrrrh i cant even! It flowed so nicely and had such a lovely feel to it (idk if that even makes sense) but it was so...ahh wonderful! :D and such a romantic place and atmosphere for a first kiss-cum-declaration of love! Beautiful! I think this may actually be my favourite piece youve written! Ah it was so (running out of new words to use!) delightful and almost poetic in a way(?) ah dudhdubehdidhduwiebdi loved it!