So cute! Very intimate and the ending was adorable! You should make a sequel to this.
Great work. :)

Do you have any idea how hard I'm blushing? I'm probably a neon light over here.

Needs to come with a warning luv: do not read with family in the room, since perverted grins and giggles and blushes are hard to hide.

Mm I love it when John tops. Fluffy and sexy fics are always the best !

That was beautiful, bravo! Don't worry, almost always I start with smut as well...well, to be honest, that's almost all I write when I do write, hahah. But yes, this was gorgeous, I really really enjoyed it! 3

Great story, brilliantly detailed! I haven't seen very many fanfictions that had such a wonderful description. Keep it up, your work is wonderful! -WLW

I really liked it. It was smutty and cute. :)

YAY! That was hot, and detailed! Good work!

This was amazing. So intimate in every sense. The author's understanding of anatomy and the character's love for one another made my heart race.