I know this was published years ago, but thought I should review anyway. Very clever writing, and an unusual take on Christine's compassion for Dynasty, though one that should have been included in the series. I was rather disappointed that such a scarring experience was discarded so easily, regarding the TV series. I'm not sold on the Tom/Christine romance, sorry, maybe you'll convince me in the next two fics. A constructive thing; the majority of the time your accents are perfect, but every now and then they slip into too much of a caricature. Just my opinion, obviously. I love your inclusion of those suffering from deafness and how their hearing aids can be affected and, overall, I think you're a wonderful writer, and should consider going into script writing for future shows. I very much enjoyed reading this.

Christian mulgrew I need you come over at tullie street greystone road Warwick road 46 C Cumbria Carlisle I want you come upstairs with me please in my room I thinking you should kiss me yes I want to kiss you back yes I do I love you Christian mulgrew do you love me yes I do I need this for you and me to ask me anything you want to tell me I brought something over for you what is it look inside small box engagement ring yes it does Lizzie Kerr yes I want to say is now what if you do mind if I prorsoanl to you yeah kneeling down Lizzie Kerr will you marry me yes I will I will arrangements wedding for us together yes me too babe I will get you wedding dress slip dress you want it yes is fine by me I will love it say some views okay yes wedding reception will booking in yes I will love it and go to hotel in premier Inn Liverpool center wow is great news yes it is for our honeymoon settled night there 9 nights yes we are can we order pottery wheel record disk oh my love my darling record player bring it up thank you again oh Christian mulgrew touch me touch my lips touch my hands and shoulders my face to making love with me now having sex right now yes babe kiss me lost of kisses hugs me sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex sex xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx suddenly Christian mulgrew your wife Lizzie Kerr mulgrew down straight xxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxx

Christian mulgrew I need you to help me I am hurt where are you at tuille street greystone road Warwick road 46 C Cumbria Carlisle upstairs in my room Christian mulgrew yes can you come in now okay Lizzie Kerr what happened here who did this to you Michael Byrne okay just sent calm tell me what happened here he was stabbed me what with his own dagger OK just sent calm let me pack your bags take you at Waterloo road indeed okay less put you in my car put your seat belt on for you right we at my house now right less take you upstairs in my room moment OK mum who is that Lizzie Kerr down straight what happened she attacked by Michael Byrne okay Connor can you send lmogea in your room right now Connor mum right now Connor I am business with Lizzie Kerr okay she injured okay I put her in my room don't tell lmogea about this I want mum I promise I not say anything to her thank you come on babe OK good girl in you go I will close door right my love get you insert in bed okay I will get you clean you up I will get you cloth wash you get you dress slip dress yes I am to making love with you yes babe

Woah, this is such an impressive chapter! The characterisation is faultless, I love this!

I have just read this whole thing (in a day, just saying! :D ) and it is FANTASTIC! You are a brilliant writer and I cant wait to start the sequel :D

Yeah you are back!

This is amazing, I've been reading it all day. I can't wait to see the sequel
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Wow, this was amazing, might re-read it now that it's finished, I hope to see a sequel in the near future because the way you write this is brilliant :D

i absolutely love this story tbh, i love the whole Connor and Imogen and Christine and Tom aspect youbrought in and how you wrote Tom exactly as he is like, i wouldlove it if you brought Chlo, Donte, Mika and Brett in in the sequel (if you do one, which i'm hoping you do) because i'd love to see how Connor and Imogen would get on with them as well as Josh.

Aww no I don't want this fic to end! I love it so much! The chapters were always amazing and I got so excited anytime you'd updated! I really do hope for a sequel because this story is so great! I'd just like to say thanks, for writing such a great story! xx

This is a brilliant, amazing story and I enjoyed it much more than the real series. I am absolutely excited for the sequel.
My only criticism, literally, and it's a very tiny one, is you abbreviate/slang words on all characters, when in reality, Connor, Imogen etc are well spoken, and only the Barry's have a Liverpudlian accent/use slang etc.
Other than that I flipping love it so much :D

A lovely ending to my favourite fanfic! And as mentioned before I'd be happy to trial out the story for you, just let me know when you're ready.

Please give it a happy ending, you can't break up Kevasty, they bring out the best in each other.

Not another Barry to go missing again! I feel so bad for all of them, Dynasty needs to come back cos her family need her!

THE TENSION!