Reviews for Lemon Pie |
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![]() ![]() Oh~ I definitely love these types of stories! Especially those 'Misunderstanding' ones! I had been searching for one about KaiShin so thank you author-san! Loved the story ~~~~ |
![]() ![]() Oh my God! It was so adorable! And hot! And sexy! Just! Oh! My! God! I totally love this~~~~~~ Thank you so much author-san~~~ for the wonderful~treat~~~~~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg it's so sexy, wonderful, perfect! I need moorreeee! Ufeufheufueifuwifuehc wjgiwhrucjerucj |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygod, I literally just hit my head on the keyboard... and since I have a laptop and the cursor just happened to be on the "post" review button... wow... hahah. Holy shit. Nicely done, by the way! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man that was hot... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God this chapter was hilarious ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dawwww, the end is seriously sweet (and so steamy before that). I liked the second chapter/story better than the first, though. The switches to Ran's pov in that one sort of seemed to break the mood you were trying to create. Thank you for the stories! |
![]() ![]() Eazesxrdctfvygbuhbijnokmp rolling face on keyboard complete. It is a very well written story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAPPY! Aaaaahhhhhhh Kaishin so cute! I love the seme-uke role reverse! Your sex scenes are good too, but you might want to use more synonyms so that words didn't repeat themselves. It gets annoying having to read the same word again and again so close to each other. 8/10 :)) keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this it’s an awesome mixture of smut and fluff! XvX |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this... and for the head banging the keyboard: tdeghhjun,yugdgyuil |
![]() ![]() REGRETS ON FINDING THIS FANFIC SO LATE, IT WAS SO GOOD ;V; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ! I loed it, it was cute ! |