Reviews for Bratz: Keep Holding On
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 22 . 6/26/2017
So first of all, I'm a huge fan of the "I'll love you forever and always" so when that was used in the beach scene between Cloe and Nevra, I totally melted. I was like, "YES. THIS IS PERF." Thank you for using that... not gonna lie, it made my night :)

This is actually the perfect ending. I don't know if you do oneshot stories, but you could do a oneshot of the gang in Switzerland during this winter break, I wouldn't mind reading that lmao they could have a great time, there could be new love interests (maybe the tour guide? XD) and they could even have a little truth or dare in their cabin, or never have I ever - something like that. I love writing those kinds of chapters... mind you they can get really long but it's all good. XD

I have you favorited so whatever you come out with next having to do with our girls with a passion for fashion - I'll be here to read it! I hope you keep up the amazing work and I'll be right here reading as soon as I can, :)

Take care!
- CreativeWritingSoul
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 21 . 3/21/2017
Awwwww! This was an excellent birthday chapter and I am finally caught up, woohoo! I wonder what Mark's birthday present for his daughter will be. Perhaps a glamorous vacation for Nevra and all her best friends where there could be new couples formed and drama on a beautiful location of the world? Italy? France? Somewhere tropical? XD don't mind me! I loved this chapter and everything about it. Great job to you!

Can't wait to read more, :) 3
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 20 . 3/21/2017
Awwwwww birthday breakfast! That's so incredibly sweet of everyone to meet up in the morning for Nevra's birthday and I adored the post Cloe put on Instagram was it? I'm not totally familiar with it but I got the gist of it. XD

I also liked how she put: # before the happy birthday Nevra... She's gonna have people all around the world wishing her a happy birthday! Besides, it's a good thing they met up to celebrate her birthday with parents along in the morning.. Because their innocent children will probably get sloppy later! XD can't wait to read more!
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 19 . 3/21/2017
Awww! So glad Cloe's parents are alright with them being together. I was jamming this entire chapter to everything. I know my Bratz music, what can I say? I may or may not have their music on my iPhone... Lmao I'll be jamming on my way to work later xD

Nice to see Cloe and Nevera are taking their relationship to the next level, ;) can't wait to see what happens next. Reading on!
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 18 . 3/21/2017
This chapter was amazing! I will take this moment to officially apologize for not reading this sooner! I adore this story and it has come so far. I've been busy with my own life I forgot to check back in with Fanfiction for awhile. But I am here now!

Reading your story reignites my love for the Bratz. They are a huge part of my childhood and will always have a soft spot in my heart. You write them so well that every time I read your story I just adore them all over again. 3

Glad Bethany got served in this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!

And... I LOVE THAT SONG, YAY!
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 17 . 7/13/2016
Awwwwww! This chapter was amazing, truly! So I sense we're nearing the end of this story, which makes me sad in a way but it also makes me excited to see what's gonna come next from you! I'm glad you're keeping this small fandom alive and kicking!

Bethany is about to go down - hell yeah! And Clovra or NevClo - my lame attempt at a pairing name- are the cutest thing ever! XD

I can't wait to see where this is gonna go and I know it's gonna be fantastic! Keep up the great work! :)
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 16 . 7/9/2016
I howled when Roxxi asked who he was screwing lately, and it being anything with legs still.. lmao xD

This was an excellent chapter as always! Can't wait to see how their show goes and what not. :)
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 15 . 7/1/2016
Awwwww, I'm so glad that Mark took it well! I figured he would, there's gotta be a parent somewhere that's cool with it. Though I wonder what Linda will think? XD I'm sure all that matters to her is Nevra's happiness, but it's good to be in a supportive household.

That text was the sweetest thing on earth. Sometimes, it's easier to write out your feelings than it is to say them out loud. You have an image of exactly what you want to say but then your voice cracks in a weird place, or you start bawling or something because it's just so damn emotional... XD But that was perfect! They already love each other so much, it's an early love right now, but it'll only get deeper. I wonder if things are gonna get intense at school, or if they're gonna be pestered by anyone. I'm sure the rest of the Bratz gang will kick asses if they have to, but high school is hell, and kids are cruel...

Anyways! I can hardly wait to read the next chapter! So glad you updated so shortly after I got caught up, it's like the update was just for me, lmao. *heart* XD Can hardly wait! Keep up the great work and I'll always be here, reading and reviewing! :)
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 14 . 6/29/2016
Ooh I hope Nevra has no regrets! I want her mother to pay for everything, and rot in hell lmao but she might be getting that feeling of 'But she is your mother' and damn it all I hope not. It's a complicated relationship sometimes, the mother-daughter ones. And as far as Cloe's mom, I'm not surprised it happened the way it did. :( Of course it might be that way for awhile. Some families... it takes them years to even begin to come around. Cloe and Nevra might even have time to get married and adopt a child before her mother comes around. Some do, and some never do. Sadly, it is what it is and if Cloe's mother is going to be a toxic person in her life, she's going to have to at least set that toxin to the side for awhile. Bless these two, I adore them! *heart*

Anyways! I am finally caught up what you have written for us and I along with everyone else I'm sure, cannot wait to see how this turns out! :)
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 13 . 6/29/2016
Awwwww, poor Cloe! It's gotta be so hard for her, I went through something like that briefly (not to the extent her mom went off on her) and it is upsetting. I believe it's the most upsetting for parents because the first thing they think of, are grandchildren. Especially if they have an only child. They're just, 'You won't be able to have children, you're closing so many doors' and then there's the panic of how badly (in some parts) gays are treated, ganged up on, bullied at school - as long as there are bigots in the world raising little bigots... it will always be that way unfortunately. Ultimately a parent freaks out because all of those things come rushing to their minds at once and they don't know which emotion to choose and it's usually anger that's the immediate response. I hope things get sorted out for her. She's looking for distractions right now which is good, but what happens when there aren't any distractions left?

I'm just gonna have to wait and read on! XD
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 12 . 6/29/2016
Oooh, so he gave that thing control over half the finances of his business? She's trying to deliberately take him out so she can have it all for herself. This woman stoops lower every time she's mentioned. Gee, I don't know if I can handle just sitting here and not being able to beat her XD though I'm sure her time will come, you've got something planned I'm sure.

Can't wait to read on!
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 11 . 6/29/2016
First of all, I apologize for not reviewing until now! I've been so busy with life that I haven't spent any of it reading, *sigh*

But I have to say that I'm not disappointed! Cloe and Nevra are finally a couple, d'aww and they're super cute. Road trip to Las Vegas was exactly what they needed, both of them. Nevra's got a lot on her plate and Cloe can help her slow down a bit. It's a perfect match up.

Though I'm not surprised that Mark was told that Linda did such a thing, I don't like that Bethany and I really hope her true colors are shown soon!

I'm reading on! :)
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 10 . 2/27/2016
So Nevera and Cloe are on a road trip! And though I've never been to Vegas, I'm very sure Cameron is right, XD

It's so nice that Cloe is very attentive to Nevra, that she needs it. She needs the support in this situation. I'm so glad that she called her father back, it takes a lot of nerve to do that. Though I wish I could've seen/heard their conversation - that's alright. Poor thing has had such a rough day. I hope it only gets better from here.

Can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out! Keep up the great work! :)
CreativeWritingSoul chapter 9 . 2/27/2016
Wow! So Nevra's mother is still a bitch, but now she's a pregnant bitch, oh boy. That's so not what she needed, on top of getting news about her father, which does seem very suspicious indeed that he was technically DUI, with Vicodin... but maybe she tried to O.D. him or something? But then she takes off after her mother's words cut her deep, yeesh.

Oooh! Yes, this bitch needs to go down for sure! I can hardly wait to read on! :)
QueenEviefan2019 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
This is a wonderful story. Please update soon with more chapters.
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