Ummmm? What are you doing on ? Your ideas and writing are SPECTACULAR! Tbh you would make a gr8 author! So far I love the story, and it's probably going to get better! I love the conflict but sometimes I want a happy ending and you do that! You balance the story amazingly! There are a few grammar errors but who cares about that! That can get better with time! I think this is going to be my new favorite story!

KAORUUUUUUU!
Don't die!
I can't live like thisssssss! You can' dieeeeee! Don't let him die, Author-san! I beg you! He hadn't even had a proper reunion with the Hikaru yet!
Please don't let this be the end!

He has to find him wright faster

Kaoru nooooooo! Great idea :) Go ooon please!

WHAT WHAT WHAT NOOOOOO WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY *sobs in the corner*

CURSES! NO HOW DARE YOU?! EVERYTHING WAS SO HAPPY! *Crying in emo corner growing mushrooms (kicked Tamaki out haha)*

The Insane One

I loooove it :) Poor Hikaru! But he will make it!

Wow! What an amazing story! Great Job hope to read more in the future!

Why is he sick

OH GOD what are they doing to Hikaru? I can't wait to find out! This story is really really amazing, I really enjoy it and seeing you updated it made my day :)

please update I love this story

WOOO WOOOO WOOOOO SO EXCITING! KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK!

If he becomes human again then every one would have him back by the way your am favorite wrighter

That's really really good! :) I want to know what happens next! Please go on!

What happens TELL ME I HAVE TO KNOW