This is a beautiful story. Very well rounded, and it contained a level of emotional depth that you don't often see in FMA fics (around eighty percent of which contain irritating Mary Sue OCs that are perfect and end up with a main character; you know the type). I was a little bugged that you ended up falling back on the clique of "Starting out with a supernatural scenario that ends up NOT being supernatural at all" (those tend to always annoy me, because it seems like a bit of a cop out and almost defeats the purpose of having the supernatural themes at all), but you handled it very nicely and I actually quite enjoyed it. You actually put my stories to shame; I'm in the middle of one right now and yours is so good that it made me hate mine. I may have to avoid reading other fics while I'm writing one haha.

But yeah. I would rate this about a 9/10; it truly is one of the best FMA fics I've read. Keep up the good work Xx

That. Was amazing. You are a genius.

currently sobbing my head off like i hav for the last hree chapters

awww...that was so sweet...is that the end of the story?

Wow...I'm almost speechless. What can I say I mean, this was just incredible. Sad but extremely beautiful. The final lines are perfect in every way. Wow.

O_O Ooooh, I don't like that this took me so long.
STILL READING!

This was the best story I've ever read! It was full of emotions. It was just incredible! Don't ever stop writing stories like this! You're amazing at it! :D The ending was sad and yet amazing. I even cried a little bit eventhough I'm not that type. Thank you for writing it and putting it up. It was great reading it! :D

oh shit oh shit oh shit

Omg this is so sad q.q

NUUU! They're crippled now!

LOL carstens so dumb for challenging Briggs. Can't wait till next update!

Wait...it was Nancys dad!? I swear you keep coming up with new ways to surprise me. I love this story so much everything just seems to tie together. I'll be waiting anxiously for the next update!

It's awosame! You're so good at this! :) The story is awosame and it's soc ute! :D I can't wait 'till the next chapter comes out! :D

Alright!
Finally!
Finished!
I've!
Been!
Stressed!
Lately!
About!
Stuff!
So!
Sorry!
About!
Not!
Reading!
/!
Reviewing!
So!
Yeah!

I'll just um...go to the next chapter and...I might be caught up again in a couple weeks. *sweat-drop*

Oooohh! so your saying that that Nancy girl's dad was the one who killed Gisela and Carsten's parents? I wonder if Al knows...