You do realised Sussex is a county not a town? Also, in England we go to secondary school not high school and there are no "football stars" or people sitting at specific tables. Its a good read, a bit bland though. I don't feel any of the emotions of the characters, such as John's anxiety or relief let alone Sherlock's. I really like how you sorted the sexual issues with them though. Also, sorry this is sent twice (I pressed the wrong button) and anonymous but it wouldn't let me sign in! (madyashiefan)

You do realised Sussex is a county not a town? Also, in England we go to secondary school not high school and there are no "football stars" or people sitting at specific tables. Its a good read, a bit bland though. I don't feel any of the emotions of the characters, such as John's anxiety or relief let alone Sherlock's. I really like how you

OH GOD MY OVARIES! I CAN'T FEEL THEM ANYMORE.

Putting the lime in the cocunut and shaking it all up is an understatement.

Lestrade got sidetracked in traffic. He won't be coming. Ever.

And here I am, avid porn reader, and you lost me at 'fellatio'.

There are scientific terms for sexual actions. Let's just take a moment and think about that.

Yesh! The shmut beginsh!

I condem you to Anderson's ass crack. How could you? That was the symbol of pure incarnate hairy hell. I shudder thinking about it. *shudders*

DING! DING! DING! The man got it right! Give him a cookie, Sally!

John. It doesn't matter if there was a form of manipulation. It got the results you needed, didn't it?

"DESTROY EVERYTHING!" Sherlock hollered, pseudo-coconunt bra jerking with his sporadic movements.

What? That's not what happened in the story? I could have sworn...

The Science of Deduction? More like, The Science of SE-duction! Zing!

...kill me.

Sherlock Holmes: the ever-flaming actual git.

John, I'm on your side. Sherlock's being an A.S.S.

Amazingly Sodding up Stuff.

Or maybe that was more like a A.S.U.S.

Either way.

DAMMIT, HOLMES!

Hey now! I'm 18 too!

hahaha...ha.

I'm so lonely.

Dammit, Sherlock! Why'd you stop?!

I wonder what happened to Micheal. Poor guy. Didn't realize John came with a Sherlock Holmes. 2-in-1 kind of deal.

Aha. Double entendre. Very sexy.

THAT'S RIGHT SHERLIE! MARK YOUR TERRITORY! LIKE A MAN WOULD!

*pounds chest* HOO-*hack*

Sherlock, John is immune to Holmesinitis.

Sherlock! The game is on! Tell Micheal where he could shove his game up in!

There's nothing wrong with looking at mens' tookishses. I do it all the time.

Not guilty as charged on accounts of thirstiness.

MARK YOUR TERRITORY HOLMES! Like a real man!

*pounds chest* Hoorah!

Excellent story, nicely written. Don't understand why you don't have more reviews!
Well done x

I read the entire thing. This was so beautiful. Everything you wrote was perfect right down to the ending. This story really shows how perfect Sherlock and John are. Also, really like the little thing between Lestrade and Mycroft! That was way too cute and perfect. I hope you keep writing! It was great the plot was also great!

Just read all the chapters in one sitting. Loved them all.