This captured Deke so perfectly, I swear I could hear his voice (the one from the first Fear Effect) as I read it. A perfect alternate ending for him too!

hey great story but fe 2 was a prequal to fe in other words the rain fe occured before the wee ming fe and if u get the good ending in fe deke dose not die but comes back to life

i thought you did a really good job keeping Deke in character and not changing him. also the story was pretty good.

That was awesome. Just plain awesome. Everything that happened perfectly suited Deke's character. And it was a very good story...I like the idea of Deke not dying, Although if you got the good ending in FE, he came back to life...

Yeah. Great job.