Reviews for Together We Fall Apart
evoplus chapter 19 . 4/28/2019
OMG HINATA JUST FUCKING THROW THAT BITCH NARUTO OFF A BRIDGE
evoplus chapter 17 . 4/28/2019
Hinata is my favorite character but I really want to punch her throughout the whole story. She is being such a doormat! She should not forgive Sasuke and Naruto just like that!
happy everyday life chapter 21 . 3/26/2019
Bwahahaha the last part was funny! Kakashi and Sakura ain't gonna last long when we have Sasuke ready to commit murder!
happy everyday life chapter 20 . 3/26/2019
I kind of wished Naruto suffered more backlash. Hinata forgiving Naruto and loving him despite his betrayal is to be expected. But I hoped fate would find a way to make Naruto pay for his sins. Naruto did sleep with Sasuke at the family home. That deserves to be punished. But it seems like Sasuke feels a lot more guilty about the whole affair than the married guy himself.

Hinata's character was very spot on!
happy everyday life chapter 19 . 3/26/2019
Sasuke did a good thing dumping Naruto. However the timing was not right. He should've dumped Naruto before their affair started. Up to this point I was sure Naruto had more deeper feelings towards Sasuke. But now, we can never know.
happy everyday life chapter 16 . 3/26/2019
The forgiving nature of Hinata really suits her. I can imagine Hinata actually saying those kind of things even to a jerk like Sasuke.
happy everyday life chapter 13 . 3/26/2019
Yes! Hinata is starting to show her backbone and I love it!

For a moment I was afraid that you might have Naruto rescue her, realize their love for each other, and just get back together like nothing happened. Thank god, that wasn't the case.
happy everyday life chapter 12 . 3/26/2019
Naruto embroiled in scandal! Serves him right!
happy everyday life chapter 11 . 3/26/2019
This line was so Hinata I loved it! : She's glad Naruto is happy, she tells herself. At least one of them is.

Kakashi's explanation to Hinata was stupid and careless. Especially with how Kakashi gets mad at Sasuke's treatment of Sakura in canon (during the war), I kind of expected him to do the same instead of excusing them. But then again, Kakashi and Hinata aren't close so that's understandable.

I laughed with Sasuke dressed up like Sakura. Is this a way for Naruto to fulfill his fantasies of having BOTH Sasuke and Sakura? It must be very creepy for Sakura.

Glad To see even Hinata has her limits! Way to go girl!
happy everyday life chapter 9 . 3/26/2019
I know I'm supposed to hate Sasuke and Naruto but I can't. I always hated Naruto's obsession over Sasuke, and also hated Naruto's disregard for other characters that care for him. So when I read Naruto disregarding his wife and sleeping with Sasuke...it sounds pretty much in-character with the manga chapters.
happy everyday life chapter 7 . 3/26/2019
Hinata is a politician's wife through and through. Her strength lies not in her attacks but calm perseverance. I like this Hinata.
happy everyday life chapter 6 . 3/26/2019
You've done the Sasuke/Naruto interactions perfectly. Even in canon, Naruto sees Sasuke and the village more importantly than his own wife and children. I'm glad that your story's characters are aligned with their canon counterparts.
happy everyday life chapter 2 . 3/26/2019
It's refreshing to read a fic where Naruto's mistress is Sasuke instead of Sakura.

And you are soooooo right. Naruto has a deep obsession with Sasuke. People call Hinata a "stalker", but Naruto has done a lot more "stalking" towards Sasuke. Naruto's obsession towards Sasuke is what made me a NaruSaku shipper to an anti-NaruSaku shipper.
happy everyday life chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
Wow. What a first chapter! You have instantly gotten my attention.
Guest chapter 21 . 6/3/2018
Hi, so, I read the story.

It was pretty good. But I was disappointed that Hinata decided to take Naruto back. I understand that she is a very kind and forgiving person, and that naruto is a good person as well. But, I was very much not a fan in the fact that she just forgave him, after years of lying and betrayal. Even though she loved him, (personally) I think she should've forgiven him, but not gone back with him.

Sorry that this is kind of negative. But I believe that no matter how kind Hinata is, she shouldn't have just let that go like it was nothing.
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