ooh yes! can't wait for more

damn he edgy

Getting awesome good can’t wait for more

Getting awesome good can’t wait for more

MAGNIFICENT... as soon as i know theres a new chapter i always drop everything to read it. this gives me life. especially with chariana finally happening

I can't wait for next chapter! I discovered the fanfiction a the beginning of November and, omg, I think I'm addicted!

YAY :D THIS CHAPTER WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT :D

Getting awesome good can’t wait for more

Great chapter! The big battle had me on the edge of my seat :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

Im done, im done, im DOOONE! you throw all these curve balls at me and all these surprises at me, WELL NOPE. take me outta the microwave because im done!

After binging this story for the past three days. I must say this is one of the best Pokémon fan fictions I’ve ever read! It provides a unique look in to the world after Team Plasma, and you made your characters really well! Each one is distinctly different and special in their own way. The plot twists had me staying up late, wanting to read more and more. This story definitely fits within the Pokémon world- I can almost see Nintendo making a game with this storyline! This whole story was very well written, and has inspired me to do fan art at some point! I definitely will be keeping a close eye on this one, and I can’t wait to see what the next chapter has in store!

i love latias. she is a good bean.
as ever fantastic to read!

Getting awesome good can't wait for more

I hate the move payback, haha, but nice job on the gym battle! I like how tackle caused wing attack to fail! And how the leader was so squeal-ey at the adorable Jay!
Also, this is making me wonder, does Ryan never use poke balls? Surely he'll pick them up eventually, but there's always the possibility that he'll take an N way of doing things and not use poke balls

That sweetness on Jay's part, tho, haha. He's a cutie that one 3