Nois

An awesome read.. the twists were intriguing in the beginning. After all was revealed I thought it could have been hidden for longer for a more dramatic reference. But, the story is beautifully crafted and written. Thanks!

Beautiful story! Probably one of my favorites I have read recently. The way you wrote the flashback scenes for Naraku’s battle and loss of Midoriko was just beautifully written. The whole story had a very even flow and never felt like I was suddenly reading a different story. Beautiful work once again, excited to read some more of your works!

What an enjoyable story.

I wish Koga and Ayame had been something more than afterthoughts though. What can I say, I have a soft spot for the wolves.

Such a great story! I love the action, the romance, and the drama.

Kill Rin!

Thank you for this amazing and detailed story. Hope you have a nice day.

kagura looked to kagome with a slow smile. you did it again

"she knew Kagura spoke the truthif the human wished to join kagura in death" you swapped Yura and Kaguras names again,

so, kagome has got to be mika right?

okay but you DID make a mistake in a previous chapter during the confrontation between Yura and Bankotsu. At first you said Yura was the one arguing with Bankotsu, but then another sentence said KAGURA wanted to rake her claws through him.

offta. i think everyone that read this chapter needed a cigarette after that one!

I don't hate Kikyo. I just don't like how she acts

great story, I loved all of it. will be reading more of what u have written

Lol forgetfulness powder, like the spell around Hogwarts ;) Nice writing, and i like that they are still within character but also not at the same time to fit the situation, i'm excited for the next chapters!