*Lenny face*

I absolutely love the movie Atlantis and was thrilled when I saw this fic. I really liked it however, I must say a few things. While I understand why you cut straight to when they were already at the camp scene, I would have liked to see more of the before action. How Alfred got in the journey, the sub, and all that. I also think that because you cut that part, character development was lacking. Arthur and Alfred's interaction was a bit lacking and felt Arthur should have been more curious to the explorers and Alfred like Kida was. Also, when the crystal and Kida were one, I think Kida was simply a vessel and was not even conscious at all so it would make sense when she just let's herself be put in the box, she was just a humanized crystal essentially. Because of that, I think cutting out the fight scene was a mistake. Overall this was a very good fic :)

Ahaha!
Haven't watched Atlantis in years but I see the resemblance so clearly.
This is good!

This story is great. And watching the movie afterwards, going; "Arthur did that!" Or "Alfred said that!" Is incredibly fun XD You made this story perfect ;w;
It would be cool if you made a fanfic for more Disney stories/movies! Would 'Treasure Planet' (the Disney movie) be a cool plot? I don't know, I'd just like to see it done, and I wouldn't say I'm fit to do it myself.

I haven't even read it yet, I just had to comment on it because oh my gosh, someone else has seen and loved the Atlantis movie?! THANK GOODNESS! I knew I wasn't alone. I'll comment again once I've read it! I already know it's gonna be good.

OH MY LAND. I was freaking out reading this. My favorite movie and my favorite pairing, geez. I love the way you wrote thiiiiiss

Hahaaa... My grades may suffer, I read this at school; it was so good. :')

I really enjoyed this story! I'm actually rather thrilled that you didn't follow the original Atlantis plot, but took small pieces (and quotes! Gosh I loved the quotes you choose ;D) and made it your own. That's my favorite part

I must say though, you have a good writing style. It was a thrilling adventure and I sure do agree with some of your Author Notes. That piece with "Hey, I'm now the crystal. Just take me now why don'cha?" Making their job easy... *shakes head*

What grabbed me about your story was the point where I thought, "Oh, they have to leave... Guess that's the end and there's no happy ending :'C" but you delivered the smiles in a unique way I would have never thought about.

The only thing I wondered was, considering the time difference, I can only imagine how long the anonymous benefactor had to wait for them to return. Then the wonder of "Well now that Alfred's back in Atlantis, the others are surely dead. :("

Ahh well. Easy come, easy go *shot*

I enjoy your disney crossovers! I looked at your other and thought it was cute *I should probably be reviewing that separately :*

So! Well done! I hope to see more stories from you, and sorry for such a long review!

Aaaah! It's taken me so long to review! I'm so sorry, especially since I have loved this story so much. And, I sorry to see that it has ended. Although, the ending is spectacular and the omake is so sweet and touching. I love the personal element of it, and the fact that the moment of time is hinted more that stated outright. Thank you for such a great story.

I'm so late commenting! I got the notification that you'd posted an omake, but I finally had a chance to sit down and read it, and it so cute and lovely. I loved every bit of this story, you did a wonderful job!

-screaming internally out of joy-

This omake was the cutest things ever!
And I can't wait to read your new college AU because you're right: there are never too much of them! :)

Aw that was sweet but sad, as all endings are, but every ending marks a new beginning (cliché much orz)- hopefully the college AU USUK fic you mentioned? Hint hint, no pressure ;p (how could I be so impertinent OTL)

Looking forward to more from such a great author!

beautiful! This was a beautiful story. i remember crying when alfred was forced to leave atlantis and now i am crying again but out of happiness. i really love the story and how you ended it. to be honest i didnt expect to see another chapter and when i did i was like 'oh sh*t this story isnt over'. i guess im lucky i didnt unfollow this. but i love the way you ended it. it really left a warm feeling in my heart knowing that they lived happy. but i just have one question. how did alfred and arthur have a kid?

awww that's so cute and fluffy and happy :)

Oh. I'm crying at the 'some things are more important than money' dedication. They never saw Alfred again - they must have wondered what had happened to him.

One thing, though. In Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star there's a name: Kiki. I think you may have changed the name and not changed all of them? Cause she's called Alice the rest of the time... Unless I'm confusing it with something else...