Please continue, PLEASE! I really like this pairing, it's refreshing. Despite that Rybacks a bastard now... but yeah I like it alot!

Again, I have to say *wow*. I can't believe I haven't read your work earlier. You have some great lines in here, like the opener - and, well, all of the fanfic was marvelously worded. I never would have thought I'd enjoy reading a RybackAJ fanfic so much, and you certainly have pulled it off here. I can't wait to see what else you have in store!

Even though I'm way late to the party, let me count all of the reasons I loved this:

1. Table carnage Ryback's pleasure centres of his brain Basically the best explanation of who he is as a character ever.

2. His utter confusion towards AJ. Also the javelin image. YOu've done a fantastic job of making their interaction feel believably and not making either of them completely out of character to do so. A.

3. AJ. I'm going to run out of ways to describe how well I think you write her, both in character and otherwise, but damn. (Yes, Ron Simmons line of the night. Sorry about that.)
This could seriously be an unaired segment is basically what I'm saying. :D

4. Illustrating their sameness through Ryback's internal monologue. The way you're able to get inside of his head to the heart of who he is as a character is truly fantastic. I also love seeing AJ through his eyes.
5. Another pitch-perfect ending. I love its ambiguousness and how completely in character it stayed. Fantastic job. :D

Nicely done.