Lame you made him a girl imo and then preggo meh kinda killed it honestly

please continue this story

update more about this story please!

I really hope you eventually come back to this story. It is quite entertaining to read.

I probably should’ve mentioned, for some reason, I’m fine with Naruto’s Oiroke, but only because I know it’s a limited time use thing, not a permanent change. I just want to keep Males being born males and females being born females separate from sudden genderbends, and stay the heck away from mpreg, because, honestly, that’s not how male anatomy works.

I could’ve done with a warning in the summary about the actual gender-switching. Not a fan of a person born a male suddenly switching to female. And before anyone gets on me about transphobia, I’m not actually transphobic, only when it’s a sudden thing, like say a potion or ritual was used. That sh*t weirds me the h*ll out. I think it’s just the suddenness... if it’s a permanent change, that is. As it stands, I don’t think I’ll be following this story, even if it does ever get updated. It’s giving me a nasty feeling in my head that I’m certain *isn’t* a headache.

Poor Seth. Lmfao. But that's hilarious that Shanks is the dad. ;D

Can yoy please tell me if you ever managed to get any more ideas/chapters down for this story, and if you did can you please post them.

Willing to Beta read them if need be, but this was too awesome an start to the sequal

So far it's pretty good very funny to. I hope you write more soon.

So far it's pretty good and very funny to. I hope to see more and that you write more soon.

please UPDATE this! love them

More please?

Oh author s note wasn't a gag. Funny turning him into a her

*cackles* You, you are an evil woman. Evil, and it is hilarious!

I really really like this crossover please continue soon