"...in the hopes that one of our ancestors will be able to"... EHHHH! WRONG WORD!
The correct word is DESCENDANTS; not "ancestors".
An ancestor would be my great-grandfather or such. My DESCENDANT would son, grandson, great-grandson, etc.
You need a Thesaurus!

I wonfer; did you ever find a reliable Beta?

So they "stepped out" of the bank to "find their new path". Uh-huh. And nobody... NOBODY recognized either Harry Potter OR his "convicted mass-murderer" Godfather Sirius Black.
Whose picture was lately on evety front page of every Wizarding broadsheet in the Western World for HOW LONG BY THEN?
I'm sorry, but this does not compute Captain Kirk

Hopefully you decide to finish this fanfic !

Every character in this fic is extremely flat. Nothing they do makes sense. The entirety of the story has been poorly thought out. Harry is a massive creep as well, you make him come across as some massive perv. Drooling over girls, his girls as stated multiple times and his strange facination with his girl 10 year old Gabby... It's mad.

Please write more.

Wow new addition to my top 10 HP fanfics. And that's a big deal considering i read over 2000 propably over 5000 i don't know but i read every day for last 5 years so... hope it will make over 150k words in the future

Like came here cause I saw the perfect harem like that's it right there those 4 girls best girls

Please continue this fanfic it’s as great as your other fanfics.

Its been 6 years so I think its safe to assume the on hold has been turned into discontinued which is a shame as this story seems like it would have been good.

Hello, This was REALLY A GREAT story. I only wished that you would have finished writing it. I always think that it's a shame when a wonderful story falls by the wayside to never to be finished. Thank you for sharing what you did write of it. Please take care and maybe think about coming back and finishing it.

please update immediately

You gonna complete this one? It is good so far

Again, I'm greatly enjoying your style of writing even if it is on an older Fic, Thank you for giving me such an enjoyable read for a few hours.

Childish story and main character. Absolutely nothing "dark" about him. Just teenage splurging after getting a little power. A very naive feeling overall.