:D

You'd call the original the "parent" (hint hint. Nudge nudge), the "donor", or the "original", but I think Dani's an original in and of herself.

this is a really good story please keep up the good work (-)

Spiders are cute most of the time except when it's a large hairy poisonous spider walking right over your head in the middle of the night and your on a loft bed with only two feet of space above it then their just creepy...

I love this!
Especially the way you write Dan. :D
The only thing that bothers me is that, in my eyes at least, Danny's biggest fear is BECOMING Dan. Not just fighting him (he beat him before after all).
But other than that great!

Update whenever you feel like it!
P.s. ...Pls soon...

I know how your friend feels. I'm afraid of spiders too. I hate them as well.

This is really good! I would love an update!

Update plz Updatw plzplzplzplz with a cherry on top!

WOAH! Plz continue this! I want to find out more! What happens to Dan?
THAT WAS AMAZING! I CANT BELIEVE HE NEARLY KILLED DANNY! WHAT THE HEY!

Oh god... Danny, everyone. This isn't going to end well.

PLEASE! UPDATE!

Wow, this is incredibly good. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. :)

PPLEAAAAAASE CONTINUE PLEEEEEEAAAAASEEEE PLEASE I LOVE THIS I NEEEEEEEED AN ENDING

Is it almost over, because I really dislike character death, unless it is Dan NOT Danny or anyone else.

Omg please update as soon as you can that is just amazing!