Im out.

To much focus on kensi and her feelings not nearly enough focus on deeks just like all other ncis la fanfics

What a surprise deeks got less focus then kensi just like every other fanfic

I like this story so far. Can't wait to read the rest.

So Deeks saves Sam's life with little regard for his own life and hasn't given Michelle up. What more does Deeks have to do to prove to Sam he is worthy of respect and trust. Sam is too arrogant. I hope he gets what's coming to him. With all his training, Deeks is right there with him taking it all.

Enjoyed your story- Onto your sequel...

OH MY GOD! DETAILS ARE ASTOUNDING!

I think this is the best chapter so far! Great job with the details!

I really love your writing style and you did a really good job continuing the story where it left off in the finale.

OMG This story has been absolutely AMAZING!

I just loved it 3 3

Dom was kensi's second partner rangco was her first

thank you for this beatiful story ,i wish the actual NCIS LA'sfirst episode of season5 will be as god as thi one of yours,hey and dont forget to keep up wrighting ,you have great talent there DaughterOfPoseidon333!

An awesomely amazing story. I loved it.

this chapter just hurt...just like watching it on tv did. :O(
Well written though. :O)

time for Kensi to go whoop someone's a$$.

love it so far.

This chapter was definitely my favorite! I was smiling the whole time. It was well written and I like how everything worked out. (I'm with Deeks, though. I think Callen would figure it out first! ;) )