This was beautiful. Wow.

Wow... This probably isn't remotely like anything that happened, but it just seems to fit the characters perfectly. Great job.

A great fanfic on the possible thoughts that Alma might have had for alice and very done, great emotional writing. Excelent oneshot

Loved it! Very well written and so full of emotion. I can really see Alma thinking those things when she met Alice.

Good job.

I don't even...this is brilliant! I've been waiting to read an Alma-Alice Wade fic here in the F.E.A.R. section and this was a delightful one-shot. You really described Alma's anger here really well. Beautiful. :)

This is creepy. And a gem. First time I've seen something meaningful involving Alice Wade.