Reviews for Kiss In The Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww! That was cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet little story. One little grammatical thing, though. When addressing someone over the course of a sentence (at the beginning/end/somewhere along the way) the name (or title, as it were) along with any additions are separated from the rest of the sentence with commas. E.g. "How are you, Riza?" - "Hello, Sir, I'm fine." - "Dearest Riza, you're too formal." When the person is mentioned, but not addressed, the commas are omitted. Same for "you". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww :3 that was so cute w great job! -Stori U- |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! I love that note from Havoc :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute :3 |